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for Naruto, You're Not Pregnant!

by Jelp

schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You know what was actually perfect about this. Sasuke made baby raising idiot proof for Naruto.
I could so see it, 'Karen, the father is an idiot. As we must continue searching for Itachi, and he lives somewhere safe for the child to be raised, Can you write a baby raising instruction manual for him. So he doesn't accidentally kill and/or screw up the kid?' I mean that was just perfect. I have heard of baby proofing but this was idiot father proofing! Please more...
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol. instruction manual?! bet a lot of new parents would love that! leave it to sasuke to give naruto an instruction manual on how to care for their kid
person Kirai
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is so fucking funny, in a good way of course. I love how Naruto thought that he was having the kid then woke up right after he got over the though of it. And well there was a baby. lol that is great!!!
person Briryan
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Can't wait to find out what the reaction is to who the father is.
person Luna
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You updated! Woo hoo! Poor Naruto...having the shock of the baby in his house now. At least Sasuke brought along all the stuff to raise the child. Though...where's Sasuke?! Naruto's going to have a hissy fit that Sasuke ran off after dropping the child off...
person Sandra
schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting, but where is Sasuke? Did he leave the baby behind?
Update Soon!
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL! Can't wait to find out more! :)
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's really interesting. Part of me wants to go 'dun dun dun... and the plot thickens' but I'm restraining if barely. I don't know whether to feel sorry or laugh my head off when Naruto keeps insisting to Tsunade and now Sakura that he's pregnant. Meh I can't wait to see what happens next... and oh is that his child O.O; how interesting. God forbid if he kicked in his sleep o.<
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow!^^ Thats going to be a good chapter! I cant wait!
person Nanin
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haha!
I love the idea so far~
Can't wait for the next chapter!