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on one had I'm like..yea!! on the other...hellooo they're Sauske's kids too! Naruto is damn lucky he even knows they exist! *sighs* poor Sasuske...they better not pressure him..he might snap

Sasuke kun... really is a worry. No joke. I hope the one he kept doesn'[t grow up to screwed up.

Oh, wow. Naruto knows about Seishi now. Of course, he's going after Sasuke-teme. Thanks for updating and I look forward to Chapter 11.

Liked it?! I loved it! I'm glad that sasuke and naruto sorta came face to face to talk but it was kind of bad with naruto finding about the other twin that way-not that sasuke was ever going to tell him though :( I hope his disparity between them can be mended and finaly they come to an understanding or agreement or something...

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I really enjoyed this chapter and was completely surprised and happy that Naruto himself jumped in and got a chance to talk to Sasuke himself. I think they really needed those moments together and felt it was very SWEET!! :) You can feel how difficult this is for both of them and feel how hard they are each trying to understand the other. I was pleased to see them figure out for themselves why Sasuke was doing things this way and even though they don't agree with him the can totally understand his point of view. I am so looking forward to Naruto's next chance to change Sasuke's mind and how he will persuade him to stay together as a family. SO EXCITED!!! :) heheeh LOVE IT!!

So I got to chapter so and read the last line and screamed "that Mother f*cker" while laughing. I think that was an incredible move that Sasuke did leaving the baby with Naruto. I usually try and wait to review when I'm not so geeked up by the story but the plot has me really excited now. Hopefully I can come back and give a sensible review.

Yes, Sasuke needs to settle down (with Naruto) so Seishi won't be in danger of getting hurt if Sasuke and his team are attacked. "Isn't that the name of the guy who writes that manga about the two gay ninja?" That's funny. Although, I must admit that I'm glad Masashi does write about those two gay ninja. If he didn't, it would mean no great Naruto x Sasuke fan fics and that would be wrong. Update soon, please.

I know it was difficult for Sasuke to choose which son to leave behind with Naruto. Why can't that teme stay with Naruto and raise the twins together? That's Sasuke for you. But maybe that will happen since Naruto has caught sight of him.

D'oh! Why didn't I see that? I totally forgot Kishimoto-sensei had a twin brother. Now I don't think Sasuke is such a bastard for leaving little Masashi behind. But I wonder how Naruto is going to react when he finds out he has two boys instead of one?

Almost a whole chapter of Sasuke x Naruto. Wow. I feel sorry for Naruto. On one hand, Sasuke is a total bastard. On the other, Naruto's in love with said bastard. What to do, what to do?