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for Naruto, You're Not Pregnant!

by Jelp

schedule November 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The baby-naming was hilarious. Yeah, there is something about the name Ringo that reminds me of drumming. XD

Suigetsu really has Sasuke pegged.

schedule October 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, know I how Sasuke got pregnant. Interesting, indeed. Naruto better keep the baby.
person DarkAngelBlossom
schedule October 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting story. Hope you update soon!! ^u^
person Anon
schedule October 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have something really quick to say, then I'm gonna finish reading and review again.

Normally if a guy takes a pregnancy test (boy does that sound weird XD ) it comes out positive. It has something to do with the hormones that occur naturally in a male but only happen in a female with pregnancy. Soooo yeah just thought you'd like to know =]

But since this is fiction: meh to science.
schedule October 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter-My clone can kick your clones butt!!
LOL Ok hehe I did find it funny that the clones were handeling things and you could feel the frustration through them from their owners as to Sasuke's and Naruto's real need for more answers to what was going on. I feel so bad for them and the pain Sasuke must be going through as a mother....dodge fire ball....correct that father being seperated from his oldest son. :) hehehe He has shown how important his children are to him and yet can't realize he makes a perfect father for them both. He's smart and strong enough to take care of them and still direct them to a better life with Naruto...and they all so deserve that happiness. I can't wait to see how things develop and how Sasuke is going to deal with how much he misses his son and Naruto...cause we all know deep down he misses his dobe too!!! :) I was so PROUD of Naruto being smart enough to send a clone rather then rushing off without thinking.....seems his new fatherhood has made a little wiser...so CUTE!!!
schedule October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A little Naruto-Sasuke baby. So sweet.
schedule October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A baby with an instruction manual. I reacted the same way Tsunade did. I couldn't believe it. At least Naruto has everything he needs. Poor Karin but at the same time I can't help but say, "In your face!"
schedule October 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I started reading this a while ago but I wound up missing updates. Anyway, I thought I would go back and re-read it. I loved this line:

"So men can walk on water, spit fireballs out of their mouths, house demons, and summon large animals out of no where and no one finds that odd, but for a man to get pregnant isn't possible...right..." Naruto mumbled to himself.

So true and funny. You got Suigetsu and Karin down perfectly, I think.

Now I'm moving on to Chapter 2.
person qwerty
schedule October 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!!
person gingitsune
schedule October 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!! I really hope that things will work out for the 2 but it's never easy for Naruto & Sasuke! :(