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August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lastly Chapter 5, last one since you updated... poo...
Hey, in Naruto's defense, I think he is doing pretty good. Changing diapers with only written instruction and only messing up twice out of six times. Pretty good. I doubt I could do it!
I like how everyone knows of the Sasuke and Naruto affair and it is THAT obvious who's kid it is. Sasuke would have died of embarrassment, that is why he has to take time away to cope. lol
lol. Why does everyone have to throw out Keitaro for a name. and I liked the side comments that Sai has. Dude... Naruto knows so much about Sasuke's mom that he has a name... look up the Uchiha tree much? Maybe this was a little more planned than Naruto let on? Hm? Paid a certain mad scientist. Not gonna lie, I would. ^___~
LMAO Sai's comments on the names. Ah, the naming part of preg fics are always fun!
Wow.... that was a lot of effort to get to a name. And the end result Masashi... random. Interesting though i suppose. Splendid one cannot argue with, elegant... I guess is fine for a boy. An Uchiha, sure, hell yea actually. So I agree. Wait a second... that was thievery of Kishimoto's name... lol. Nice one there. I give you props. When in doubt use what is already given.
I wonder if Sasuke planned for allowing Naruto to name him and thus building attachment... really, how long did he get to mother his child before giving him up? I wonder how hard that must have been for Sasuke. In many ways he shares Naruto's strong desire for family. Possibly even more so knowing what it feels to have family.
Aww... poor Auntie Sakura. I've kinda grown to not mind her so much... though Kishimoto having her suddenly get the hots for Naruto seeing how devout he can be to Sasuke and her after a good couple years... little late if you ask me. But I guess both have failed to treat Naruto right, so lesser of evils. Which, call be biased, I think is Sasuke. He first pointed out Naruto was a person after all.
I guess that isn't entirely fair, considering that Naruto and Sasuke both have an understanding from being forced to grow up a whole hell of a lot faster than either Sasuke or Naruto...
YaY! For Sakura joining the dark side of yaoi love! We do have fun here. ^___~
Wee! Back to the Sasuke group. And we get to see some baby time and hopefully learn how Sasuke pulled this perfect strategy off. Well... guess he had months to do it in... had to do SOMETHING waiting for the bun in the oven.
Clever idea for a genjutsu to hide a pregnancy... but I can't even imagine a fat but strong Sasuke... doesn't add up. and how in the world did they manage to do missions?!!! Dude... Sasuke's something, that is for sure.
LOVE SUIGETSU!! LMAO! his excuse for baiting poor Sasuke is he's worried about him! Yea... love him.
I see why Sasuke didn't name the child... dude Suigetsu "little brat" lol
lmao. I like the Sasuke-snookums. yea.... I'm starting to agree with Sasuke, Suigetsu likes it rough. ^___~
Suigetsu likes it rough and likes to skate on thin ice. Purposely bring up the father. And dude Sasuke MUST be feeling hormone imbalance to let his guard down and make a comment outright that pointed to Naruto like the one he did.
Dude... Suigetsu let out a bombshell. Lady doth protest too much? What's going on with Suigetsu is what I would be asking if I were Sasuke. Like damn dude, don't project on to me just because I'm an easy target being pregnant and grumpy and all.
Aww.... sentimental Sasuke. Why do I sense a lot of flashbacks in this story to get everything together. Though I like it. I want more preggers Sasuke! WEE!!!
How kawaii... Sasuke smiles. I love it! I miss those days. I know Naruto does every time he looks at his precious Team 7 pic. T-T
Oh, how I worry what shall become of Naruto and Sasuke!!!! Kishimoto please go easy on their tortured souls (you caused it after all!)!!
So yea... dude... cold. You WOULD stop at the good chapter. BABY MAKING!!! AUGH! I GOTTA WAIT! どうしてですか！！！！！！
Oh well... poo... probably won't get back to these for some time... but maybe by then more is available... I forgot to check. Are you still writing this?? it would seem yes... more or less. Come now, you shamelessly promoted and I shamelessly fed your desires for reviews... I gotta have given you a little spark that should get me AT LEAST a couple of extra chapters before it dies... I have faith it won't. Kinda かかわいい and amusing all at once.
Hey, in Naruto's defense, I think he is doing pretty good. Changing diapers with only written instruction and only messing up twice out of six times. Pretty good. I doubt I could do it!
I like how everyone knows of the Sasuke and Naruto affair and it is THAT obvious who's kid it is. Sasuke would have died of embarrassment, that is why he has to take time away to cope. lol
lol. Why does everyone have to throw out Keitaro for a name. and I liked the side comments that Sai has. Dude... Naruto knows so much about Sasuke's mom that he has a name... look up the Uchiha tree much? Maybe this was a little more planned than Naruto let on? Hm? Paid a certain mad scientist. Not gonna lie, I would. ^___~
LMAO Sai's comments on the names. Ah, the naming part of preg fics are always fun!
Wow.... that was a lot of effort to get to a name. And the end result Masashi... random. Interesting though i suppose. Splendid one cannot argue with, elegant... I guess is fine for a boy. An Uchiha, sure, hell yea actually. So I agree. Wait a second... that was thievery of Kishimoto's name... lol. Nice one there. I give you props. When in doubt use what is already given.
I wonder if Sasuke planned for allowing Naruto to name him and thus building attachment... really, how long did he get to mother his child before giving him up? I wonder how hard that must have been for Sasuke. In many ways he shares Naruto's strong desire for family. Possibly even more so knowing what it feels to have family.
Aww... poor Auntie Sakura. I've kinda grown to not mind her so much... though Kishimoto having her suddenly get the hots for Naruto seeing how devout he can be to Sasuke and her after a good couple years... little late if you ask me. But I guess both have failed to treat Naruto right, so lesser of evils. Which, call be biased, I think is Sasuke. He first pointed out Naruto was a person after all.
I guess that isn't entirely fair, considering that Naruto and Sasuke both have an understanding from being forced to grow up a whole hell of a lot faster than either Sasuke or Naruto...
YaY! For Sakura joining the dark side of yaoi love! We do have fun here. ^___~
Wee! Back to the Sasuke group. And we get to see some baby time and hopefully learn how Sasuke pulled this perfect strategy off. Well... guess he had months to do it in... had to do SOMETHING waiting for the bun in the oven.
Clever idea for a genjutsu to hide a pregnancy... but I can't even imagine a fat but strong Sasuke... doesn't add up. and how in the world did they manage to do missions?!!! Dude... Sasuke's something, that is for sure.
LOVE SUIGETSU!! LMAO! his excuse for baiting poor Sasuke is he's worried about him! Yea... love him.
I see why Sasuke didn't name the child... dude Suigetsu "little brat" lol
lmao. I like the Sasuke-snookums. yea.... I'm starting to agree with Sasuke, Suigetsu likes it rough. ^___~
Suigetsu likes it rough and likes to skate on thin ice. Purposely bring up the father. And dude Sasuke MUST be feeling hormone imbalance to let his guard down and make a comment outright that pointed to Naruto like the one he did.
Dude... Suigetsu let out a bombshell. Lady doth protest too much? What's going on with Suigetsu is what I would be asking if I were Sasuke. Like damn dude, don't project on to me just because I'm an easy target being pregnant and grumpy and all.
Aww.... sentimental Sasuke. Why do I sense a lot of flashbacks in this story to get everything together. Though I like it. I want more preggers Sasuke! WEE!!!
How kawaii... Sasuke smiles. I love it! I miss those days. I know Naruto does every time he looks at his precious Team 7 pic. T-T
Oh, how I worry what shall become of Naruto and Sasuke!!!! Kishimoto please go easy on their tortured souls (you caused it after all!)!!
So yea... dude... cold. You WOULD stop at the good chapter. BABY MAKING!!! AUGH! I GOTTA WAIT! どうしてですか！！！！！！
Oh well... poo... probably won't get back to these for some time... but maybe by then more is available... I forgot to check. Are you still writing this?? it would seem yes... more or less. Come now, you shamelessly promoted and I shamelessly fed your desires for reviews... I gotta have given you a little spark that should get me AT LEAST a couple of extra chapters before it dies... I have faith it won't. Kinda かかわいい and amusing all at once.
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August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you find some time to update this soon. I love the concept. Really good story. Keep up the good work =]
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July 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH! this story made me giddy with laughter and excitement! freaking hilarious! <3
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July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol cute chapter. ^^
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July 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
whooooo hoooooo
this story rocks cant wait for the next chapter
this story rocks cant wait for the next chapter
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July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the new chapter, although the baby names thing was a bit too long.
I'm so excited to read the next installment - keep up the great work! ^^
I'm so excited to read the next installment - keep up the great work! ^^
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July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gah! I love this story. So unique and funny. I think your description of Sasuke's mentality (as explained by Suigetsu in your most recent chapter) hit the nail on the head, and it was amazing to see it in writing. Sasuke hates that he is emotional, and your insight into why he can leave others, and how he's terrified they'll leave him, is just brilliant, in my opinion. I'm hooked. :D
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July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg ty ty ty ty for continuing this fic, I sooooooooo LOVE it and had almost given up hope that it would be finished or updated and here it is actually updated twice me thinks since I last read it, and I want to say how much I enjoy reading this and cant wait for more, especially how and they why of how Naru and Sasuke did the dirty lol and why Sasu decided to leave the baby with Naru and not name it??? Wow, Sasu leaving it up to Naru to name HIS son lol, and I really want to know what Sasu kun really thinks of Naru, he has to feel something if he had sex with him and then give him the baby huh??? ok ok I will be patient cant wait for more, till than I thank you once more for the awesome read, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice idea of story ^:^ I can't wait to see how will be looking Naruto's taking care of his and Sasuke's kid :)
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July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So many lines in here that had me laughing though 'That is the stupidest looking diaper I have ever seen.' and the sailor moon crack(which had me imagining a skinny fellow in a sad tux hanging around with hurly burly multicolored sailors who could bend someone in two had me dying for a bit). But it's so cute XD. I love Sai and his everything. And Sakura. I wanna hug her. And I cross my fingers for a boyfriend in her future cause she's so supportive and deserves it :).
Sasuke, you silly little... really violent... mother. ...actually, that's quite scary. And hilarious 8D.
Sasuke, you silly little... really violent... mother. ...actually, that's quite scary. And hilarious 8D.