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for Naruto, You're Not Pregnant!

by Jelp

person Briryan
schedule July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cute chapter! Really looking forward to the next one.
person Rose
schedule July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another chapter, woot! Don't have much to say because its always fun to read this story. I liked the Beatles reference and nice name for the kiddo. I just wonder where you are heading with this story, if Sasuke and Naruto's paths will ever cross or if they are meant to stay apart. Anyway, good job on this chapter, I look forward to future developements.
schedule July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol can't wait for the next one!
person Rachel
schedule July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah! This update made my day. Despite half the chapter being about naming to baby, I still very much enjoyed it. I am still waiting for some Naruto/Sasuke confrontation, and this story s still building, but, gah, love it.
person ZeroZoey
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really Really glad you updated, it has been to long. But I really enjoyed reading your story. Keep up he great work and I hope you update soon.
person Mizzroja
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hmmmmmmmmm belly button.... Kab/oro was off the hook!!! Is the mommy still alive??? Please update soon!!
person DBZVelena
schedule April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You are briliant.
This was the best Mpreg i've seen in a long time.
Your humor keeps me on the floor for hours.
Please write more and update soon.
Also, please give Naruto and Sasuke a happily ever after.
I really want that for them.
person Anon
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cool! Naruto decided to raise his and Sasuke's son! What will he name him and what about Sasuke? Will he really let Sasuke raise their son alone? Hurry with the next chapter!!
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Bwaahahahhahahaaaa!!!!!
I loved your pregnancy explanation. What a set-up. ^^ You had me giggling like a mad woman. lol

Keep up the great work!
person qwerty
schedule April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The part about Sai was funny: "The baby is not a drawing!"
Great chapter! Sorry about your computer and the virus. That really sucks.