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for Like a Breakaway

by jessysuki

schedule February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update ^_^. i think the talkshow should be named "Inside your mind" based on her jutsu. she gets in peoples head.
person monrque
schedule February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like your story it is off to a good start.
Keep up the good work.
person Dragon7
schedule February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter UPDATE SOON.
schedule February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ahh yeah none of my friends like yaoi either. But the LJ will get you a lot of ppl to talk to!!!!! Keep up the good work. Its awesome!!!!!!
schedule February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! yay another chappie!! god you scared me! i thought you forgot about this story?!!
XD lol, I loved this chapter, can't wait for more!
schedule January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have free time since the school year just ended here so if you want I would be glad to beta for you. So far its an interesting plot. I have seen soccer themes but this one is new with Naruto being in the medical field of the soccer team. I hope you don't procrastinate too much I am very curious about this story. Oh my email addy is morename4me@yahoo.com.
schedule January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So far I like your story. please up date soon.
schedule January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i like it! lol when Kakashi told Sasuke, that crawled up his ass and died in there... haha pricless, wish i could've seen him say it.
yay there's going to be a lemon, but dont rush, im really enjoying this story so far.
looking foward to reading another chapter!
person loli04
schedule January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love soccer and I love this couple, thus I can't wait to read more of it!
dame loli
person Word_Slave
schedule January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You did very well in this. I can't wait to see more... It's a bit disconcerting to have the point of view change so much in one chapter... a bit hard to follow. But otherwise, I can't wait until the next chapter