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for Wrong Call

by HeartlessArchAngel

schedule July 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story. Looking for the conclusion of it. Can't believe how clueless they both were lol.
person gwyllion
schedule August 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! An update! *cheers* And they're both such idiots...lol! Secretly, I wish that Neji would hit on Naruto to create more angsty drama....but I shall have to see, eh? Can't wait to read what happens next! Please keep up the wonderful work! :)
person Anon
schedule August 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This fic is so funny. Although the idea is quite cheesy, its a proper cheesy. The kind that is well written and doesn't make you cringe plus Sasuke and Naruto are so hilarious and perverted.

Can't wait for the next chapter, cheers~!
person heartstar
schedule July 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lol good one I love that little snippet!
schedule July 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lol oh my god lol I love that especially that last wh who was his irst on! hah lol Please update soon!
schedule July 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
:D :D Fantastic!!! I cant stop smiling! Please update soon!
person Mother_Of_Bones
schedule July 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lol loving it so far! I like what you did with the characters! Teenage angst indeed lol.
schedule July 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMFG this is too funny. Sasuke is just an angry ball of angst isn't he. I swear it's the avenger coming out in him each time he thinks Naruto is crushing on someone else or had slept with someone else first. I applaud Naruto for not falling into a jibbering ball of nervousness when he asked Sasuke to have sex with him. I wanted to cheerlead for him but I'm now sort of afraid what Sasuke will do to him because he's all evil-ish with his plotting of different ways to rape Naruto before he gets caught. And of course the Uchiha would know where Sasuke lives... such a stalker. Meh, sad how so much misunderstanding can further complicate what could otherwise be a simple situation. You are evilly brilliant in doing this and I'm glad your friend fussed you into writing more because seriously that'd be cruel to end it at chapter 6. I'd so haunt you for that even if I just saw this story today XP
person Am
schedule May 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! :3 but I've waited ages for it to update.. :( will it ever?
person Jezabel-Swan
schedule December 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, I love this, it makes me all giddy inside! I especially love Sasuke inner turmoil. Curse his stupid brain. What am I saying I love his stupid (Naruto-focused) brain!!!!!!
Please continue this, it's so very adorable XDDDDD