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for Wrong Call

by HeartlessArchAngel

person kinai26
schedule February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay a new chapter - thanks XDDD Sasuke is so cool - I cross my fingers that he will find the courage to confess his love to Naruto, face to face
schedule February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
^_^ Oh no, that wasn't the end, for this is like a begining!! I can't wait to see what Neji has planned!
person Word_Slave
schedule February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
can I just say here how damn excited I am to see this! IT was great. Love it, love sasuke... I was waiting for Naruto to be standing behind him... I mean... damn that'd be mean but maybe SAsuke would molest him in front of Neji...hmm
sorry off in my own pervy mind.
Slave
person a kitsunes light
schedule February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am pretty sure that empty space where neji was looking was naruto and now he is devastaded, or am I going too ahead of myself or imagining things?.... mmm.. I just hope sasuke doesn't mess things up too much.
person XxxblackpearlxxX
schedule February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hehe.. Look at my brand new account! :-D Its not really new.. I just forgot the password.. -_- But it rocks right!! :-D well.. This chapter was awesome!! XD i hope Naruto didn't hear all that! That would totally suck.. Then how did Neji know he's cute? Me.No.Liky.. :-( Well.. Anyway.. There were minor typos.. And the lack of your beta's contribution shows.... Well anyway.. Good luck with the next chapter!! ^_^
person LadyWolf
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor boys......I can't wait to see how the raven get's outta this one!!

Post soon!!
person FantasyChild017
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
KYAAAA!!!! how can you end it like that... It was getting really good too lol ^-^
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*glares... waits with beer... remembers she doesn't like beer... goes ugh* Please don't leave it like this, we want more!! Please? you can have the beer *nods*
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WAAIIT!! The Last chapter was the END?! THAT Can't be the END!! You have to make a sequel... Or more! The "Wrong Call" fic is Great!
person Word_Slave
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
was that really the end??? ok, you confused me, which, admittidly is easy to do. please continue. Don't leave it there.
Slave