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for Black Aria

by RotSeele

schedule April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lovely ending.

keep up the great work. ^^
schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow kyuu is the king of the bijuu cool!!!! oh poor sasuke lmao
schedule April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
haha! He'll never see this coming. hehehehe
schedule March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm.. I think I need to go back and re-read. I feel like I've missed something somewhere.


schedule March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I know I'm missing something. I love this story but feel the need to point out a plot hole... what the hell is up with Shukaku?! I mean he just up and returns (I'm guessing Mandara did something to release the biju to ruin Sasuke's powerbase?) and is suddenly in human form (like Kyuubi) and nobody questions it? I mean Naruto doesn't seem at all shocked by this and even somewhat recognizes Shukaku. I dunno. I can accept it, but its still strangely unexplained.

Keep up the good work.
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
sasu really needs someone to beat some sense into him. HN
schedule March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmm I like it :] You should update soon! I want to know what happens on this mission with the kiddies! :]
luv
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schedule March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hot damn!
schedule March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap! Sasuke's gone mad!!! ^^ (Also, I love his horrible disfigurement.)

Keep up the great work!
schedule March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Heh. Naruto will make a good sensei. ^^