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May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like the way you write. There is something poetic about it. I will be frank, I do not like the discussions between characters, but it is like that with all fanfictions. However your descritpions are beautiful, sad in some way, at least I see sadness in them and not overly sentimental. Usually this type of story is so sad that it makes one want to vomit, but in your case your writing style does not impose emotions, it suggests them. Nice work.