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January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story.... no really, i mean it.
I'm not really disgusted by the pairing as much as i am that i enjoy it.... don't know why, i blame the same people you do.
But really, i like the story, i like the pairing and i like the themes. (i'm screwed up, i know)
Looking forward to the next from you.
Kaminokaze
p.s. Considering your stories, both here and on ff.net, i seriously hope you won't die.
I'm not really disgusted by the pairing as much as i am that i enjoy it.... don't know why, i blame the same people you do.
But really, i like the story, i like the pairing and i like the themes. (i'm screwed up, i know)
Looking forward to the next from you.
Kaminokaze
p.s. Considering your stories, both here and on ff.net, i seriously hope you won't die.
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January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You should change the vixen reference at the end. A vixen is a female fox. A more appropriate term would be a kitsune or spirit fox which are known throughout Japanese myth as tricksters, plotters, illusionists, and other such deceptive terms.
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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you had better not die I want more of the story. I think it is cool to have a smart bastard Naruto for a change. too many people make him the stupid bumbling idiot and I'm tired of it. Also, for being unbeta-ed I didn't see any horrifiying mistakes. This story definatly keep us hooked!
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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes I'm a little disturbed by this story.... Not because of the femSasuke but because I really what to read more of this femSasuke. Look forward to reading more.
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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love it, a really great way for a smart bastard naruto, being the mastermind behind everything, it would be cool a little lemon and i hope this continue with a real bastard naruto who dominates his slaves all the time and not the other way around.
keep with the good work
keep with the good work
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January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG....I thought I'd never read a story where Sasuke was a female. PLEASE continue this--This is different and edgy and I am already falling in love with the plot! Keep up the work! Looking forward for an update!!!!!!! Thankies! Muchos love!
~Sho-Chan~
~Sho-Chan~