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for The Apocrypha

by BreathingInTheSoundOfYourLies

person bob665
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You really are a talented writer. At first I thought this was a future story where Sasuke was about to die as your authors note led me to think. Then I realized it's during the exam and it just seemed to fit so perfectly. One minor point. You refer to one character as a Chunin, but at this point they should all still be Genin.