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by arabuzumaki

person ifXY
schedule November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hiiii!!!! I really like the idea and the way you have portrayed, i admit it is a bit OOC. I would like to re-write your fic, if you dont mind of course. Pls reply to my e-mail address: life_993house@hotmail.com
Ja ne~~ if-chan
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW THATS SO FRIGGIN CUTE X3 *flails* thanks for the review btw :3
schedule January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You Really have to give rights to the artist for the song if your going to post it. And Fix the disclaimer. It does need work, but you can improve it with some time and effort. I never really pictured Sasuke thinking that about Naruto and I'd be intrested to see where you might have gone with it, had it just been a little longer.