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July 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, love it. Poor Sasuke and Pein though. Is is completed? If not I hope you continue it.
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November 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please update this story. It's really enjoyable to read.
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April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I wasn't sure if I would even try this story either, because I'm so skittish about what I read that I only stick to certain things- but since it was your writing, I decided to give it a try anyways.
And now I love it so much I'm begging you to at least add another chapter. =D your writing is awesomesauce amazing.
And now I love it so much I'm begging you to at least add another chapter. =D your writing is awesomesauce amazing.
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January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i hope you add more to this story! i want to see sasuke become closer to itachi and pein become happy. maybe pein could even tell itachi his real name? UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!
ASOTA
ASOTA
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January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4 seemed very rushed considering the details you put into the previous chapters.
The events that happened in this chapter could have been easily more detailed and stretched to give you 2-3 chapters rather then just one.
I still love this fanfic but don't cut corners just so you can upload a new chapter ASAP! Please take your time if you need to!
The events that happened in this chapter could have been easily more detailed and stretched to give you 2-3 chapters rather then just one.
I still love this fanfic but don't cut corners just so you can upload a new chapter ASAP! Please take your time if you need to!
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January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely fantastic chapter! I cannot wait to see what happens next. I promise, if this were a published novel, I would be reading non-stop. So I'm lucky I can only read as much as you allow so that I can savor this story longer!
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January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm a little sad that you didn't build up the anticipation to Sasuke's rescue more. However, I still loved the chapter. I hope you really develop Sasuke as a character since he has so much potential.
Keep going!
Keep going!
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January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What an intense situation...I really liked the comparison of Huck Finn, it was fitting. Thanks for the wonderful update. Looking forward to the next!
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January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Intense. I can tell this is going to be an awesome story!
Keep going!
Keep going!
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January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
O_O holy shite this is the most random and awesome fanfiction you've written.