rate_review Reviews

I did try to find that musical part but couldn't find it......found tons of other sites but didn't think any of them were the correct one since none were of a musical or play. I like suck at surfing the net....if its not spelled out for I'll like never find it.lol its so sad...sniff Thankfully it was thanks to other fans I found this site and live journal....which I am like FOREVER GRATEFUL!!! :) SQUEEL!!!!

Chap 1

Ok I just love the little skit at the end of this chapter.....very funny....I just LOVE such clips by authors.....LOVE IT!! I am one of those people that reads everything the author writes in the manga side bar....I never miss a single word!! :)


I totally get how the story had to start how it did and am so thrilled to see Sasuke soon to make .....lol ....cough...date with Naruto....cough...wicked grin!!!!

I really like the details to the story about how Naruto deals with what he's doing.....the whole mental image and self reason behind it is so real and believeable that it really gives life to the story and pulls you into how Naruto is thinking and feeling. I like that!! Can't wait to read the next chapter!!

I love your author's notes, I think they're funny. As for the story, I really like it and can't wait to read more. ^_^ Sorry, normally I leave more descriptive reviews for people, but I'm not feeling so well this morning. ^_^

kiba is hot ^_^ i love his scene, and he really needs a ditzy bf to lvl out his super sexiness
is the movie guys and dolls?

lol that story was uber awesome
i can't believe ur a guy, u write awesome yaoi ^_^
lets talk some time dude

~krazy yaoi fangurl out

Dude I love you (joking) your stories are nummy.

Finally some GaaraNeji action!!!

Give your voices chocolate!!!! I give my voices chocolate all the time and they supply lovely mental images, hehehe.

Wow excellent Chapters. And no wonder people thought that ours were incredibly insane alike. I choose Orochimaru, cause he'd seem like the one to be the boss-man. And the whoring it's very close to mine, but not entirly! lol. Great job, and i'll email you on the outline I have on mine, So you can tell me what you think Cha!

[P]assmore [K]itten

- sighs - i had to go through and re-read it so i could get some idea's on the smut. i think my brain is broken, no really i stared at an epty word pad forever. and i think your psychic cause you alaways seem to know when im slacking off. i think all the fumes from the hair die got to me, and it turned out like 5 dif colors. ok im done i think i got what i need

talk about spilling your guts im glad naruto was upfront about it,it makes things move better and its not all this fumbling around and dancing about their feelings till we all throw up crap(still interesting).sasukes got a way with words im sure other people would have taken being comanded by sasuke an honor but not naruto he practuically spits in his face nice.cant wait til you can update

i am trully lovin your story and Orishi is the perfect person for Kiba......he is soooooooo cute, funny and sweet. i think he fits in this story perfectly........i am so glad that Sasuke told that snake that Naruto is quiting i just hope that he can keep him safe.....please update soon.......your very talented and i enjoy reading your story keep up the good work.


p.s Orishi's outfit totally H.O.T hot!