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January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. It'd be very interesting to see Sasuke following Naruto home and proposition for sole "ownership" of Naruto's body. That'd be hot - and kinky.
And a trip to Hershey, PA? lol Ever been? I'm not too, too far from there. :D
Next chapter when possible please! ~ Jelp
And a trip to Hershey, PA? lol Ever been? I'm not too, too far from there. :D
Next chapter when possible please! ~ Jelp
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January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
the whole happy birthday thing from the corners always weird to me,i mean hes talking to air.im surprised sasuke actually left naruto like that after busting in during his session he just left.someones finding out what feelings are yay.hope you can update soon
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January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
golly! someone's falling for naruto, and his name rhymes with the opposite of a dominant naruto envisions...hahaha! this chapter was bpth cute and refreshing. there was no longer the bastar-insensitive sasuke while there was still the wanting-sasuke naruto, so they really are on the road to something more. very vivid imagery and sweet characters. good one. :)
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January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i have no problem with OC's as long as sasuke and naruto don't end up with them, i like jealousSasuke. he's even hotter
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January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well this does seem interesting.
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January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg hot!!!
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January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, that was great lol. I dont know if it was the way it was spaced out or what but that chapter length was way more like it :D, or maybe im just bias since lemon is my favorite flavor ;) lol. And everyone love the legendary 'uh oh kiss' between them! Im sorry to hear ur sick :( but if u type this well when ur sick... then do u think u could stay sick maybe? U know just until ur done with this story lol.o Ok Ill stop now, I hope to c another chapter up soon!!!!!!!
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January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i like this....its funny and it shows Sasuke as i see him
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January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww, poor Naruto didn't orgasm! Sasuke can be so mean.
I'm really hoping he redeems himself. It'd be kind of strange, but maybe pay for Naruto to just be his. Poor Naruto-kun. ::huggles him::
And just as a side note, I figured I'd let you know that the prostate isn't a bundle of nerves; it's a gland. It's a common fandom error to call it a bundle of nerves. I wrote it as such in one story, and someone was kind enough to correct me. I figured I'd pass on the knowledge!
Looking forward to the next chapter! :D
~ Jelp
I'm really hoping he redeems himself. It'd be kind of strange, but maybe pay for Naruto to just be his. Poor Naruto-kun. ::huggles him::
And just as a side note, I figured I'd let you know that the prostate isn't a bundle of nerves; it's a gland. It's a common fandom error to call it a bundle of nerves. I wrote it as such in one story, and someone was kind enough to correct me. I figured I'd pass on the knowledge!
Looking forward to the next chapter! :D
~ Jelp
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January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke's an ass!
The couple I think you should use is Gaara/Neji, I do LOVE Neji/Shikamaru, but Shika's taken. I also like Kiba/Neji, but apparent Kiba's taken too...
Post soon!! XD
The couple I think you should use is Gaara/Neji, I do LOVE Neji/Shikamaru, but Shika's taken. I also like Kiba/Neji, but apparent Kiba's taken too...
Post soon!! XD