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for The Sound of Lust

by Nelogenazea

person Bishonen
schedule April 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I haven't read much Naruto in a long time but i'm glad i read this it was super cute ahnd sexy not to much else to say other than it was great.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
schedule August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i like
i imagine (hope) that actually (If they were real people) Kin and Tayuya would be like that
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good. you ought to do more for this story.
schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A great start! Don't worry about not having English as a first language, you can't improve unless you practice. I know I can't write a single word in German. As for the fanfic itself, I like it. If you can manage to keep it up I'll definitely be following your work.