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for Cravings

by katsuyo

schedule September 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i will be waiting for the 3rd chapter as Itachi has found out about the kids but dont know they are his lol and i want to see what happens when he finds out that little bit of news
person MayN
schedule May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
(This is may_neuma from y! gallery) I am on my hands and knees, salivating, drooling, humping, and going to faint by the time I finished reading this for the 100th times @@~ Itachi's last line in this chapter brought tears to my eyes because I strongly believed that those two (Itachi & Naruto) are amongst the characters who deserve to be happy the most TuT I also like the way Naruto handling those cretins called council. Although I noted a big difference on how Naruto and Itachi interact with each other... it's more like husband & wife even if they don't realize it. Is it because their children's presence. But Itachi didn't know about them, yet. Right? So this is the only thing that I found weird. ANd lastly, I LOVE Ibiki/Iruka (a breath of air from suffocating!KakaIru pairing =_=)

Keep up the wonderful work sweetie. And has you been contacted by the other jury from Itachi&Naruto Contest Award (http://community.livejournal.com/itanaru_award/) notifying your two stories participation on several nominations? If so, please notify and encourage all of your readers to vote for you hon.

Wrapping it all, I want to thank you for the dedication, I am a bit busy recently with several contracts of property which I need to skim through and discussed with. So I haven't gotten the proper amount of time to harass you again by my PMs.

Love,
May - Saniwa
person DarkEyes
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loving this. my fave pair. man i hope tachi finds out soon, so he and naru-chan will be together..more of the tiem. not to mention easier for them. really looking forward to the next chapter.
ja ne^^
person takayu
schedule April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! How very angsty...and yet...I love it.
:3
..do foxes really mate for life?
...I must do research... *wanders off*
schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh Tachi if only you knew about your kids!
person satterb
schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really cool fic! I thought Itachi's last sentiment was beautiful. I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for all your hard work.
schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ha!! If he only knew. ^^


Also, I glad you decided to continue this.
Keep up the good work!
person animelover
schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
itanaru 4EVER!!! oh man that was just hot! i'm wondering though why he didn't recognize the kids as uchihas? yeah, he wouldn't expect it, but still .... ok, ok, it would've been a leap. but hey, a fun one!

see ya later!
person a kitsunes light
schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww the ending was soooo sweet!!! I wish itachi knew that those are his children!!!!!
I hope he realizes that somehow by finding naru when he is still pregnant and showing or something like that...
I can't wait to read more!
thanks for writing!!
person Nefertari_Alita
schedule April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhh nice story, love it. Why only a oneshot? Please one more part *puppy eyes* I just love a strong and confident naruto and itachi was loveeeeeeee. Maaaa i want to see the councils reaction. Kick there a*** Tsunade. *jumps around* Itachi would love the pups. *sigh* They definitly need more time together.....*really really naruto-like-puppy eyes* pleassseeeee. Itanaru forever *jumps around*