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April 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Incredible..I really enjoyed this. I somewhat forgot about it and am glad I rediscovered it!
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April 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I read this in like a few hours and I enjoyed it a lot! One thing I really enjoyed was how Naruto, despite the pain being in the underworld caused him (the torture and rape) he was still willing to spend eternity there in order to make sure his friends were able to escape. That, I thought, was really in character for him and I liked how he was rewarded for his selflessness. You guys wrote an awesome story and I enjoyed reading it!
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May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic. I like how you have incorporated the Greek Gods into the Naruto universe. I really hope you don't let the lack of reviews put you off posting the next bit. Thank you both for sharing your talents with us.
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April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is so great! I read all the chapters in one go aand I reaaaaaaaaallyyyyyyy hope you'll update it soon! I'm dying to know what will happen! Please please update!
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March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
interesting story. I love how you stirred in both the Naruto-verse and the Greek gods and legends. I can't wait to see what you have in store next. Do you think that when you do add to this, that you could send me an email with the web address to let me know?
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February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The more I read of this the more it captivates me. First I had some trouble accepting that Naruto was with someone other than Kakashi but now I understand his need for comfort. I feel sad for Sakumo, hes been in that aweful place much longer than Naruto. Its a wonder he can function at all. This story is fantastic in plot descriptions and how its written. I wish the next chapter will be uploaded soon. I long for it.
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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
UWAAAAAAH. I'll admit, I was a little skeptical at first, because the style didn't immediately reel me in, but I really loved the concept, so I kept reading. And now I'm totally fucking hooked. XOMG. SO GOOD. For serious. Even though it can be a bit clunky at times, your easy portrayal of such strong emotions is so powerful it made me ache physically. Sakura's devotion to Naruto is amazing, and Sasuke's (what looks to be) path to redemption are heartwrenching. Not to mention the torture of Naruto's situation. At first I didn't like the idea of Naruto turning to someone aside from Kakashi for comfort, but I do understand what it's like to be in constant agony and to want nothing more than a kind touch. It's hard to ignore someone willing to give it to you, and even harder not to love them for it. Overall, I'm really liking this so far, and I can't wait until you have time to post the rest of the chapters. Delicious'd for sure. =D
(PS- this is riot_fox311 from livejournal. XD. I'm SO glad I came over here to read this instead of studying for my midterm today >_>, and I'm glad you're not feeling quite so discouraged anymore. This is an awesome story. You might want to try putting it out there are some other Naruto fic comms with more traffic. It is a hard sell, but if even one person gets interested, that's good, right? =D)
Anyways, great work! I can't wait to read the rest. ^_^
(PS- this is riot_fox311 from livejournal. XD. I'm SO glad I came over here to read this instead of studying for my midterm today >_>, and I'm glad you're not feeling quite so discouraged anymore. This is an awesome story. You might want to try putting it out there are some other Naruto fic comms with more traffic. It is a hard sell, but if even one person gets interested, that's good, right? =D)
Anyways, great work! I can't wait to read the rest. ^_^
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January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Way to go, Persephone! Btw, I thought it was Charon, not Chiron. I could be wrong. Otherwise, way to go Sakura for all the research and stiff backbone. Dang, I LOVE this story!
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January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow this is one hell of a story....its so deep....it paints a picture and makes youfeel it i really like it please continue your very talented writers.
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January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Omg...Kyuubi in on it too?! Oh man..Naruto is in such trouble.
Honestly, wonderful scene with Sakura, Iruka, and Sasuke. So touching, it made tears come to my eyes.
Honestly, wonderful scene with Sakura, Iruka, and Sasuke. So touching, it made tears come to my eyes.