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for Unforgiven Sin

by Kagenoshi

person Gwenn
schedule January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi, you gave me the link to this story on the kakanaru community.
I think this story is interesting... I like the writing, and you describe the emotions well. The only thing bothering me is the love between Sakumo and Kakashi, not because it's an unusual pairing but because I feel like Naruto is replacing Kakashi... But that's only my opinion.
I think this story has great potential and I'm curious to see where this is going.
schedule January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh boy...that's not good.... i feel for naruto cause kyuubi is gonna enjoy getting his revenge on him... jeeze.. so what's gonna happen to sasuke and what happened to itachi's soul? did it go to heaven or is it in tatanos?
schedule January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, regardless of who is doing who. I like the story, the sex is just icing on the cake!! I do wish there were some way to get instant notification of updates here like on ff.net though. Don't be discouraged because people don't review, some just don't know what to say.
schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This fic is fabulous! All the characters are so well described and Narutos fate make the readers soul hurt. Plz tell me that Kakashi will remember Naruto and save him from Tartaos. Plz plz update soon!
person Sylvia
schedule January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*humps you* :3 ~ Can't wait to read this again... and again... once you add those corrections... sorry I didn't catch those mistakes sooner Kami-chan ^^;; *huggles* Still luffs you *purrs on you* :3 ~ tee hee
person Sylvia
schedule January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Roman numerals for chapter titles... how appropriate? XD lol *hugs* :3 ~