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for The First Born

by LadyKyou

person chocmilkchan
schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
thanks for updating! though the chapter was short in terms of action and explanation, i like your setup. :)
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hachi makes me laugh. ^^

I like that Gaara is still caught up with what happened to him with Hinata. It would be cute for the two of them to get together. ;)

Keep up the good work!
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very interesting, feels unique, i look forward to the next chapter ^^
person chocmilkchan
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
interesting setup. i'll be checking back for more updates. :)