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for Pretty When You Cry (or Three Acts)

by nimblnymph

schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*holds off nosebleed*

Damn. This is still good, a few weeks later. If this is an example of the quality of smut you write, I can't WAIT for someone to get jumped in Double-Edged!
person LadyPiro
schedule February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Pretty, Pretty, Pretty!!
schedule February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was great! Short and sweet. :)
person Karista
schedule January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Anything with VAST as a soundtrack has to be awesome and you didn't disappoint. I hate to use 'cute' to describe it, but yeah, cute. It was quick, dirty and to the point, but well written to where it said so much more without having to SAY it. Great job.
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy fucking wow.

And sadly enough, that's about as lucid as I can be right now. I cried in Act I, had a life-threatening nosebleed in II, and was happy enough to burst into tears again in the finale.

You are awesome, and I must review again sometime when I'm more coherent.
person tillean
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Seriously beautiful! Well written and sexy.
person Anon
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for writing this while we patiently wait for the continuation of "Double Edged". I just love this pairing!!! Kakashi is hot!!!!!
person Ivy
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like the way you broke the story down into 3 parts! And the Vast song is awesome that you used for lyrics ;-)