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December 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that this was a particularly excellent story! It's not very often that people write a story of innocent and passion so well. The naivety of Naruto is adorable and you can sooo tell Sasuke was just waiting to be asked for a kiss! XDD
Really, I thoroughly enjoyed this story, particularly because of how well you wrote the characters, mixed with your obvious talent of writing. I anticipate reading more of your stories for your well written words XD
Again fucking brilliant story *oops I swore....oh well*
Really, I thoroughly enjoyed this story, particularly because of how well you wrote the characters, mixed with your obvious talent of writing. I anticipate reading more of your stories for your well written words XD
Again fucking brilliant story *oops I swore....oh well*
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July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
absolutely love it.
btw, did Hinata faint of something? xD
btw, did Hinata faint of something? xD
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January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWW! Sequel sequel!!!!!!
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January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww! Normally I don't like Sakura in fanfiction, but you wrote her well. You wrote everyone well, actually. Nice and funny.
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January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww¢¾ I like it lol.
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January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hahahahaha hhehehehehhehehehe ^^
Sasuke is such a smug bastard. lol
Keep up the goodwork!
Sasuke is such a smug bastard. lol
Keep up the goodwork!
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January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awwww. That was so sweet.
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January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
XD I really like it! It was really funny and cool. :D Naruto was really cute :) Its the first time I read something like this!
Thanks for writing! :3
Thanks for writing! :3
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January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love this story, it was so cute!
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January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
SQUEEE!! So cute and way smexy!
Very well-written, sweet and interesting plot, and great ending. Loved it.
Very well-written, sweet and interesting plot, and great ending. Loved it.