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for Parasomnia

by Usha

schedule April 10, 2018 at 12:00 AM

 Two thumbs up. A well-written story. Loved every word of it from beginning to end. The author did an awesome job. Keep up the awesome work!

schedule March 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great story absolutely loved it, the whole sleep disorder thing really spoke to me.
person ohitsjordan
schedule September 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Best. ItaNaru. Ever.
It had EVERYTHING. Normally, if the smut isn't in the first few chapters, I move on, but this? No. I had to stick with this to the end. Just too damn good to turn away.
The whole Kakashi ordeal? Didn't see that coming. At all. I was like damn.
Anyway, perfect story, perfect writing. I'm off to read your other stuff.(:
person smint45
schedule July 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god!!! I just found this story and read the whole thing!!!! It is amazing!!!! I totally love it!!!! Thank you so much for sharing this with us!!!!
schedule July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice stroy. I'm glad things worked out in the end. This was the first fic I read that had Kakashi as the 'evil villian' role...it was different, but it worked. It was believeable. Your title struck a chord with me, seeing as I have two forms of parasomnia (chronic insomnia and obstructive sleep apnea) so I get very little sleep, and when sleep comes, my stupid apnea wakes me :( So I feel for Gaara. I had met a friend at a sleep clinic. She had aggressive somnambulism, and although when awake she had a Hinata-type personality, she would hit people and physically hurt them in her sleep. I thank you for taking a serious approach to the situations you wrote about. You didn't jeer or make light of the events you talked about. It's nice to know that there are a few decent people out there. You brought a lot of information to the fore front, and shed some light into the dark world of parasomnia for thoes who didn't know. Thanks again. Enjoyed the story thoroughly :D ~TiEnya
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
personally i was expecting Sasuke ... but Kakashi what a twist ... hahah robot chicken
Oh I can't wait to find out what happens ^__^
person Drakshah
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story :)
Umm...no declaration of love?
Is it everyday implied but never uttered kind of thing?
Loved itachi's character. There is simply not enough Itanaru out there. More such great writing from you, please.
Am a great fan of all your work :)
schedule July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hahah sexsomnia ... well that would make somethings overly interesting
Great story so far ^__^
schedule July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AH! Loved this chapter ... true the relapse isn't the greatest thing but it was still sweet ^__^ Poor Itachi doesn't know he is falling in love ... or already in love ... which ever ^__^
person kinkou
schedule July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Mewwwww.... it has to end? *sobs* But an epilogue would be really welcome. That or I even second the thoughts of a sas/sui story. (hehehe with Sakura causing snide problems and itachi trying to get Naru's parents to accept a wedding proposal lol).