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June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dang! What a wicked cliffie!You totally got me with the Kakashi bit. Now I have to go back and try to figure out the clues that would have pointed that way. Eagerly salvating for the next chapter.
~Devious
P.S. Thanks for bringing some Sai. He doesn't get enough screen time in fics here. I just adore the penis-addict.
~Devious
P.S. Thanks for bringing some Sai. He doesn't get enough screen time in fics here. I just adore the penis-addict.
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June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You're evil! *sulks* ...... No, I'm just kidding, but that cliffhanger was horrible, I'm at the edge of my seat waiting for the continuation. God, the intrigues just keeps increasing in number and the story is just getting better and better.
I'm really anxious to know who killed Orochimaru and kidnapped Naruto... It does not appear to be Itachi, even though they're blaming him for the murder, I'm quite certain he didn't kill anyone or hurt the person he cared about. The cliffhanger suggest that my earlier suspicion might have been correct, Sasuke may have done something. I'm not sure though whether Itachi thinks he did it or if he realized something entirely different by looking at Sasuke's displayed emotions. I actually doubt that Sasuke could have done something like that since the person who kidnapped Naruto undoubtedly appeared to have killed Orochimaru as well, and why would Sasuke want to kill Orochimaru? Would he go as far as to kill a person just to get his brother arrested?
It doesn't make any sense and I'm really confused which makes me all the more anxious to read the continuation. I hope they'll find Naruto and that Itachi will be freed from all charges and that he hopefully hasn't killed anyone.
Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs =^_^=
I'm really anxious to know who killed Orochimaru and kidnapped Naruto... It does not appear to be Itachi, even though they're blaming him for the murder, I'm quite certain he didn't kill anyone or hurt the person he cared about. The cliffhanger suggest that my earlier suspicion might have been correct, Sasuke may have done something. I'm not sure though whether Itachi thinks he did it or if he realized something entirely different by looking at Sasuke's displayed emotions. I actually doubt that Sasuke could have done something like that since the person who kidnapped Naruto undoubtedly appeared to have killed Orochimaru as well, and why would Sasuke want to kill Orochimaru? Would he go as far as to kill a person just to get his brother arrested?
It doesn't make any sense and I'm really confused which makes me all the more anxious to read the continuation. I hope they'll find Naruto and that Itachi will be freed from all charges and that he hopefully hasn't killed anyone.
Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs =^_^=
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June 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope Naruto is all right. I think Itachi has been set-up but I don't know by who yet. I can see why he would want to kill Orochimaru but I don't think he would have actually planned to kill him. Definitely looking forward to the next update.
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June 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Omg! Sasuke's gone crazy!!!! *jumps up and down* Right? I don't think it was Itachi at all. Oh, why did Orochi have to die? He was actually pretty cool in this fic. I'm so looking foward to the next update so that we can hear about what Naruto saw. Keep up the great work.
~Devious
~Devious
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May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me Itachi didn't have another relapse. I hope not. Things were going so well between him and Naruto. Update soon so I can find out what happens next, please.
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May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WHAT?!! How dare you leave it at that. I finally have some time to read your story and you leave me with a cliff hanger?! Oh, but it was a good one so I can't stay mad at you. Please update soon, I'm sitting on the edge of my seat here. Good job!
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May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG, Naruto, no!!!! O_O
And that wasn't Itachi was it? Please say it wasn't... *tear-eyed*
But the person was someone Naruto recognized and his mind screamed betrayal meaning it must have been someone quite close to him. And judging by the red eyed glare directed towards him as he passed out, it must either have been Itachi or Sasuke, and since Itachi's the one who murder people when sleepwalking he seems to be the one who most likely did it. However, Sasuke could have done it in order to frame Itachi for something he didn't do and therefore get him arrested and sentenced to prison... I don't know...
You've made me all excited now, curse you! No, I'm just kidding :) ... but I'm anxious to read more.
And everything was going so well for Naruto and Itachi now too, their relationship had improved and they were so incredibly adorable together. With the possessive streaks (when Itachi crushed that glass in his hand.. I totally snickered, so kawaii!) and the sweet kisses.... *cries* And now this happened! I hope they are alright and I hope that the person who did die, considering that Naruto's attacker had a bloody and sharp object in their hand, isn't Gaara, Kakashi, Iruka or Tsunade. *crosses her fingers*
Can't wait for the next chapter! I'm at the edge of my seat, waiting for the continuation!
Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs =^_^=
And that wasn't Itachi was it? Please say it wasn't... *tear-eyed*
But the person was someone Naruto recognized and his mind screamed betrayal meaning it must have been someone quite close to him. And judging by the red eyed glare directed towards him as he passed out, it must either have been Itachi or Sasuke, and since Itachi's the one who murder people when sleepwalking he seems to be the one who most likely did it. However, Sasuke could have done it in order to frame Itachi for something he didn't do and therefore get him arrested and sentenced to prison... I don't know...
You've made me all excited now, curse you! No, I'm just kidding :) ... but I'm anxious to read more.
And everything was going so well for Naruto and Itachi now too, their relationship had improved and they were so incredibly adorable together. With the possessive streaks (when Itachi crushed that glass in his hand.. I totally snickered, so kawaii!) and the sweet kisses.... *cries* And now this happened! I hope they are alright and I hope that the person who did die, considering that Naruto's attacker had a bloody and sharp object in their hand, isn't Gaara, Kakashi, Iruka or Tsunade. *crosses her fingers*
Can't wait for the next chapter! I'm at the edge of my seat, waiting for the continuation!
Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs =^_^=
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May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, God, I've been missing out on so much! I'm so sorry for not having been able to review, but a lot of things in my life kept me preoccupied.
Anyway, the chapter have been so incredible that it makes me unhappy to know I had missed them all, but since I've read them now I'm happy because they're absolutely amazing and I loved them.
Seeing Itachi almost kill Naruto made me feel sorry for them both, because it would be horrible for Itachi to have known what he had tried to do and Naruto for being strangled by someone he cared about.
But he turned out alright, Naruto was stubborn and didn't start to avoid Itachi just because of what had happened. And he didn't avoid him when Sasuke told him to either, that duck-butted bastard... *grumbles*
I liked the scene at the Cheesecake Factory, that was amusing and OMG, Orochimaru. I wonder if he poses a threat to Itachi and Naruto's relationship, I'll be interesting to see.
And the kissing scene at the end of the latest chapter, OMG, *ItaNaru-fanigirl sqeal*. That was so hot/cute/amazing!
Well, I could sit here for hours and point out the awesome parts of these chapters, but I'm afraid you'd find that annoying.
Thank you for writing them, I can't wait to read the next one.
Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs =^_^=
Anyway, the chapter have been so incredible that it makes me unhappy to know I had missed them all, but since I've read them now I'm happy because they're absolutely amazing and I loved them.
Seeing Itachi almost kill Naruto made me feel sorry for them both, because it would be horrible for Itachi to have known what he had tried to do and Naruto for being strangled by someone he cared about.
But he turned out alright, Naruto was stubborn and didn't start to avoid Itachi just because of what had happened. And he didn't avoid him when Sasuke told him to either, that duck-butted bastard... *grumbles*
I liked the scene at the Cheesecake Factory, that was amusing and OMG, Orochimaru. I wonder if he poses a threat to Itachi and Naruto's relationship, I'll be interesting to see.
And the kissing scene at the end of the latest chapter, OMG, *ItaNaru-fanigirl sqeal*. That was so hot/cute/amazing!
Well, I could sit here for hours and point out the awesome parts of these chapters, but I'm afraid you'd find that annoying.
Thank you for writing them, I can't wait to read the next one.
Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs =^_^=
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May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I got to read 2 new chapters at once. I'm going to be late for my exercise session but it was so worth it. Sasuke is just determined to keep Naruto and Itachi apart. I bet that he was the glaring shadow at the end of the last chapter. I had vaguely heard of Cheesecake Factory. I've never been to one but I've had cheesecake before. Suigetsu really cracked me up. Seriously, what is up with Sasuke not liking sweets? Unless you have a medical condition like diabetes, there is no excuse for not liking at least ONE sweet thing. It's just not humanly possible. Great updates and I really look forward to seeing what happens next.
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May 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good luck on your exams. Loved the new chapter. I wonder if Itachi will ever get around to giving Naruto the book he bought for him. I wonder if they'll ever hook up. Keep up the amazing work.