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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha! Naruto tripped while looking at Neji's ass! 8'D
Oh poor him. XD Though he did have a nice view..
Ehh, poor Kiba. ;D
His travelling was pain.
I'm suprised that Hinata would actually ask for an advice, but it does make sense. XD
Can't wait to read more! I hope you keep writing and update soon again.
Oh poor him. XD Though he did have a nice view..
Ehh, poor Kiba. ;D
His travelling was pain.
I'm suprised that Hinata would actually ask for an advice, but it does make sense. XD
Can't wait to read more! I hope you keep writing and update soon again.
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January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh I've got plenty of suggestions on how they can proceed and none of them involve much in the way of clothes.
Excellent chapter m'dear! So glad to see you writing in this fandom now.
Excellent chapter m'dear! So glad to see you writing in this fandom now.
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January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i am really loving this story! i look forward to seeing where it goes. great job so far! will be anxiously awaiting your next chapter. thanks
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January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooh the excitement is just getting started. I really want Kiba and Gaara to finally meet!
Ino describing hetero sex to Hinata was hilarious! But..no more hetero, it's on to the yaoi!...Please?
Lmao Naruto's hung! Smexyyy ^^
Please update soon! :)
Ino describing hetero sex to Hinata was hilarious! But..no more hetero, it's on to the yaoi!...Please?
Lmao Naruto's hung! Smexyyy ^^
Please update soon! :)
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January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good fun and great tension.
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January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I think Naruto rocked Neji's world with that kiss. Nicely done as always :)
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January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!
Hah, wow! That kiss was hot!
Who knew Naruto could kiss like that? XD
And I have to say, you are excellent with words.
''Choji showed more passion towards his chips than the two showed each other.''
Hilarious, once again. xD You write really well.
Can't wait to read more. I'm already too interested about the mission. xD
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
Hah, wow! That kiss was hot!
Who knew Naruto could kiss like that? XD
And I have to say, you are excellent with words.
''Choji showed more passion towards his chips than the two showed each other.''
Hilarious, once again. xD You write really well.
Can't wait to read more. I'm already too interested about the mission. xD
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
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January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story ideas and pairings. Nice read too. Thanks - can't wait for more~! :)
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January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! Really intriguing story! The whole concept of a homosexual mission and the fact that Neji didn't think Naruto was competent enough was brilliant! Not to mention the kiss was majorly hott.
Can't wait to see what happens next. Naruto, dump Hinata already! ;P
Can't wait to see what happens next. Naruto, dump Hinata already! ;P
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January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Heh, nice fic.
I like it. Heh, they have a really lovely mission. XD
I wonder if Naruto is going to kiss Neji.. 8D ..Well, of course he is, if he wants to go to that mission!
And could it be that Naruto even has some kind of feelings for Neji too?
It did bother him a little to hear that Neji has actually been with a man! 8DD
..And really, Lee and Neji? I like them, though in this, I'm glad Sakura asked Lee out. XD
''Gaara shifted in the large chair, sure that his bottom would never be the same''
Hilarious line by the way. XD Oh and, Kankuro and Ino, hehe, well not for long! >XD
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
I like it. Heh, they have a really lovely mission. XD
I wonder if Naruto is going to kiss Neji.. 8D ..Well, of course he is, if he wants to go to that mission!
And could it be that Naruto even has some kind of feelings for Neji too?
It did bother him a little to hear that Neji has actually been with a man! 8DD
..And really, Lee and Neji? I like them, though in this, I'm glad Sakura asked Lee out. XD
''Gaara shifted in the large chair, sure that his bottom would never be the same''
Hilarious line by the way. XD Oh and, Kankuro and Ino, hehe, well not for long! >XD
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!