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February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story though I have to admit I didn't like the ending I know there together and there happy I just feel kinda sad but great writing as always.......
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June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Can we have a story with a happy ended without the main characters dying? I mean I really liked the story but gosh can't people just live. Thank you for a great story.
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June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I knew it! that bastard Danzo! his filthy scheming was all over this...and tsunade! ibiki had threatened them and and the council!
first they sanctioned Kashi, and then Ibiki... and for what!? a bioweapon breeding program?! they're breeding superweapons!? the clone must have been truly unstable. was it that which was used to eliminate its competition!?
kill kashi to take his place and ibiki cause he was getting to close and would certainly avenge his husband?
well they certainly have a lot to answer for and two very irate beings who will certainly let them have it. there was a reason they hadn't left to go to another realm, now we know what it is...
avenge your family ibikashi... send them straight to perdition!
first they sanctioned Kashi, and then Ibiki... and for what!? a bioweapon breeding program?! they're breeding superweapons!? the clone must have been truly unstable. was it that which was used to eliminate its competition!?
kill kashi to take his place and ibiki cause he was getting to close and would certainly avenge his husband?
well they certainly have a lot to answer for and two very irate beings who will certainly let them have it. there was a reason they hadn't left to go to another realm, now we know what it is...
avenge your family ibikashi... send them straight to perdition!
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May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
strange how Gai could retire when ibiki and 'kashi couldn't [weren't allowed to]...
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May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your killing everybody! How sad but I sort of guessed that this would happen. This a good story and I can't wait to read more.
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May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please give us more of this story. I gotta know what mission was so bad they had to call Ibiki out on it.
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May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story and I've been watching the rest of them for a while. I like your character development and think your doing a great job. Keep up the good work and please keep updating.
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May 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
why do i get a strange feeling about the upcoming chapter? i know you are a bit twisted but please don't do what i'm thinking.
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May 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh no~! Sumi is too young to be a Jounin. I hope Ibiki doesn't die on his mission~! Love this story. Thanks!
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May 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
so sad story but I love your writing,please more!