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May 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoying this piece. I love GaixIruka - you are making it work so nicely. Thanks~! :D
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May 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. And the virgin Kakashi? Totally a new one on me. I like the Ibiki/Kakashi pairing and the Iruka/Gai is something rather different too, but it works. I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the good work and keep the chapters coming!
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April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow iruka was really brave to do that, it sure must have hurt. and what's with ibiki at the end? did he figure out that it was iruka?
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April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow,I am so glad that they got a little girl. But I can't wait to see how Ibiki and Iruka's relationship develop. Thank you for a good story and I can't wait to read more.
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April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow i wonder if the baby will be a boy hmmm. and i wonder what the name will be it would be so hard for ibiki to do all of this. oh and is kashi only communicating with him in dreams? oh and is 'ruka a virgin? lmao at gai he is always so eager. oh and i wonder if ibiki and iruka will fall for each other?
oh and what's with tha iruka-hater up there
oh and what's with tha iruka-hater up there
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April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you've done it again! i just cried and cried. poor ibiki... he misses and loves his kashi so much. [i miss him too] he really wants to do right by him, and i can see that he let the stupid council know that he is not above seeking revenge. good! let em sweat! and it's not to see he's that ruthless, because if it was me, i'd take the pack from iruka. but he is not above honoring his beloveds wishes. ~~I can't see there ever being a relationship between the two, ibiki and iruka other than that of friends... he loves kashi too much. iruka will serve as someone to help him stay on track and raise kashi's child. and if it's a boy, what name would he have? kashi would be too painful.
it's great that gai is gonna pitch in too. gai knows all about kashi, especially his fighting style. and the pack will go to the kid one day. i believe kashi would be pleased to know that ibiki is going to make sure this situation never happens again, and is raising his chibi. as stated. ibiki's a better person than me... i'd destroy any evidence ... and kill the woman. as a message to the council. and tsunade looking over her shoulder in fear for the rest of her life... priceless. kashi chose well when he chose him. it's so not fair how they were cheated... but at least he'll have a reminder of sorts. that comment ~All he could think of was how beautiful his husband would have looked with a baby in his arms, and how Iruka was a poor substitute. “I’m so, so sorry sweetheart,” he muttered, “It’s all so hard.” is so heart breaking... it has me bawling... ~ "...I could never love anyone else the way I loved ‘kashi, it would be foolish to even try.” he ended sadly. couldn't have stated it better myself...Truer words were never spoken.
it's great that gai is gonna pitch in too. gai knows all about kashi, especially his fighting style. and the pack will go to the kid one day. i believe kashi would be pleased to know that ibiki is going to make sure this situation never happens again, and is raising his chibi. as stated. ibiki's a better person than me... i'd destroy any evidence ... and kill the woman. as a message to the council. and tsunade looking over her shoulder in fear for the rest of her life... priceless. kashi chose well when he chose him. it's so not fair how they were cheated... but at least he'll have a reminder of sorts. that comment ~All he could think of was how beautiful his husband would have looked with a baby in his arms, and how Iruka was a poor substitute. “I’m so, so sorry sweetheart,” he muttered, “It’s all so hard.” is so heart breaking... it has me bawling... ~ "...I could never love anyone else the way I loved ‘kashi, it would be foolish to even try.” he ended sadly. couldn't have stated it better myself...Truer words were never spoken.
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April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I never know what to make of your stories...you're very talented, that's certain...but...I don't even know. You always have to turn some one into a bad guy with no redeemable traits. It is possible for a villain to be human.
I'm sorry if this seems harsh, it really isn't intended to be.
I'm sorry if this seems harsh, it really isn't intended to be.
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April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much! So original and moving. Can't wait to find out who 'she' is (the matchmaker?) and why Ibiki asked Iruka to move in.
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April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
No! Please don't let Iruka ruin this story. Ibiki should always be with Kakahi. By the way you make the most adorable uke Kakashi, this story would've been better if there was no Iruka in it, heck every fanfiction would be great with out the addition of Iruka...he is an ugly mo fo that should be cut of from Naruto plus he's still a lousy chuunin!
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April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hmmm 'where is she?'<----- who is she?. does kashi have a daughter? i'm so confused. but i know you'll make it clear in the next chapter ^_^
oh ibiki reuniting with the pack was a very warm moment. oh he doesn't want to change the sheets cuz the still smell like kashi very very sentimental, he has to hold on to any little factor cuz mere memories aren't enough. i'm loving this
oh ibiki reuniting with the pack was a very warm moment. oh he doesn't want to change the sheets cuz the still smell like kashi very very sentimental, he has to hold on to any little factor cuz mere memories aren't enough. i'm loving this