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for Matchmaker, Matchmaker

by sesshabattousai

schedule March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my sessha!!! as soon as tsunade broke the news i began to cry. this was a heart breaking chapter. oh and kashi appearing at the end really broke my little heart to bits. your really did play on my emotions in this chapter, to imagine a figure such as ibiki being broken hearted like that oh my so sad. i hope iruka comforts him and that he opens himself to being comforted.

*cries* oh kashi come back to me!!!!!
schedule March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
~i must say this is the saddest story I've ever read... and poor ibiki... he showed such restraint... me, I would've killed the bitch. broken her neck and tossed her remains to the four winds. so very sad... how will he go on without his beloved?

~at least they had one last moment together. you owe me ten boxes of tissues!
person dkf
schedule March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, ow ._.
schedule March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gosh, I have to admit that I shedded a couple tears on that chapter. I loved the chapter and well, you made that it come alive with the grief and pain Ibiki was feeling. What a talented writer you are. This story is so riveting and heart warming. It really is a great story. I can't wait to read more. Thank you a very good read.
schedule March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Why when I read this well written story, do I get the feeling that you are going to kill off Kakashi? I know I should wait for the rest of the story but wow, this story draws the reader in and makes the reader want to more. I enjoy how you make the characters real or more human, the concerns of Ibiki and the devotion of Kakashi, your characterations of these not so well know Naruto character's is very well done. I wait with great anticipation for the next chapter. Thank you for a very fine read.
schedule March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow but tsunade is really pissing me off. hmmm what's the deal with kashi and ruka?
schedule March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hmmm why is tsunade acting like such a bitch? i know she has the best interest of the village at heart but jeez, give the guy a break.
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol the banter between kashi and tsunade was real funny lol
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Thank you and about freaking time! Sorry not the story though it was great to read but telling off that @#$%^&* THING that dares call herself hokage. Sweet jesus I DESPIZE HER!!!!!!!!!! Okay sorry, lost my cool. I love how Ibiki came to Kakashi's defense without, what is that term, under-mining him? Shit I'm almost begging you to write her pushing the line and having the village lynch her alive jsut because she's a callous slut. I would say whore but they actaully get paid. Anyway this is great, I love these two as a couple, and I hope things with iruka go alright as well. Laterz!
person cynaga
schedule March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Glad to see more and some insight into Kashi's psyche. Thanks~!