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for To Rise by Sin

by Ljiljana

person satterb
schedule February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You should give yourself more credit...this was beautifully written. Maybe if you'd have re-read it before you posted you could have caught some easy grammatical errors and misspells, but it was still good to read and very hot. Of course Uchihacest always is!
person YaoiFan!!
schedule January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very hot! Well done!