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for Teach Me

by Shaduan

person Surathan
schedule March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"Being human was so complicated."

Poor Gaara

Cute story ^_^
person omgwtf17
schedule March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore this story but I have two teensy little problems. The first being the age difference. Gaara and Sakura are actually the same age with Gaara being a few months older. The second is that it seems like Gaara is actually starting to like Sakura, as in romantically. Now the reason I liked this story so much to begin with was because Gaara was initially asking Sakura for help to please his bride (as in someone else). It just kind of seems like you're going to leave that path for Gaara/Sakura as the story progresses and I really wish you wouldn't. You have a unique concept here and I would love to see all of Gaara's learning go to his new bride. Other than that I have no complaints you're doing a wonderful job.
schedule March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohmy. I still dont get how you get me on the eage of my sit and all they did was toughing.
person Denilmo
schedule March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I must say Sakura and Gaara is, well not a bad pairing, but one that I don't read frequently. I actually like your story especially with the fact that Gaara doesn't know how to be close to a person has totally been taken into account. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter to see what kind of imrpovements he's made and is still making.
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, nice update. I like how your progressing the story, very interesting and awesome.

Please update soon once more!

Check ya later...

Death
schedule March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Update please, this is rather interesting I want to read more please update!!

I enjoy the pairing, and the idea is very original too which is always a plus in my book!!

Please update soon.

Check ya later...

Death
schedule February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just fell in love with this story and can't wait to see where you take it, hope for an update soon!
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh god that made me sqeel like a fangirl!I love how you are doing this. You still have the lemon part like most lemon I have read but ou made it sweet and cute. It looks like Gaara still has a part of his demon with possess thought. I cant wait to see how this turn out.

I begin to think thou that Sakura is the one he get married to.
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well its official, I definetely want to read more of this story.
You are very good at keeping everyone in character. And I love Temari looking out for her baby brother.
I look forward to seeing where you take this next.
Legilmyth
schedule February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was so cute!You did a really great job with Gaara in this one.I cant wait to see what happen next.