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April 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
seems like AFF don't really like that I wanna comment this way so I continue it on Y!Gallery, I hope you don't mind!
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April 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hi!
I've been read about this story on y!Gallery on Daydreamer79's recommend-list. firs I saw that it's a Pein/Kakashi fic I thought it's not my thing but when I read her comment on it I thought I should give it a chance, so I'm here.
and WOW!!!
really seems to be an interesting story! I wonder how Kakashi and Pein become lovers. and poor Iruka. he sure stepped in the middle of something he shouldn't. he sure'll have awkward moments with Kakashi later. at the other hand, if Kakashi really wanna give Naruto to the Akatsuki and he'll realize it... uhh this will be ugly XP
I've been read about this story on y!Gallery on Daydreamer79's recommend-list. firs I saw that it's a Pein/Kakashi fic I thought it's not my thing but when I read her comment on it I thought I should give it a chance, so I'm here.
and WOW!!!
really seems to be an interesting story! I wonder how Kakashi and Pein become lovers. and poor Iruka. he sure stepped in the middle of something he shouldn't. he sure'll have awkward moments with Kakashi later. at the other hand, if Kakashi really wanna give Naruto to the Akatsuki and he'll realize it... uhh this will be ugly XP
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April 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
uhh this sure will be ugly! Kakashi, you're just so stupid sometimes! you're just too much in your own world and it's pretty dangerous!
I mean, Iruka is a nice person and was very much embarrassed from the start, so Kakashi shuld've just shown him the face he always shows, offer some perverse jokes and when poor Iruka is red like a tomato twice, ha should've asked him to keep his little secret and leave. okay, he was rough with Iruka back then apropos of the chunnin exam, but after that he mostly made fun of him so he don't have to return to this rough mode. Iruka's already saw one face under the mask yesterday and now he showed him one more. stupid mistake. Iruka is kind and easy to embarras but he isn't stupid!
I just love the way you wrote them! they're two big fav for me and I just love when they're sweet-cute-fluffy lovers, but sometimes it's so good to see they show this face of their for each other (cause I think both way is "under the manga's skin" if you know what I mean) especially with a good plot- and this seems to be that for me :D
(sorry for haphazard mistakes, english is not my native. let me know if something is less understandable!)
I mean, Iruka is a nice person and was very much embarrassed from the start, so Kakashi shuld've just shown him the face he always shows, offer some perverse jokes and when poor Iruka is red like a tomato twice, ha should've asked him to keep his little secret and leave. okay, he was rough with Iruka back then apropos of the chunnin exam, but after that he mostly made fun of him so he don't have to return to this rough mode. Iruka's already saw one face under the mask yesterday and now he showed him one more. stupid mistake. Iruka is kind and easy to embarras but he isn't stupid!
I just love the way you wrote them! they're two big fav for me and I just love when they're sweet-cute-fluffy lovers, but sometimes it's so good to see they show this face of their for each other (cause I think both way is "under the manga's skin" if you know what I mean) especially with a good plot- and this seems to be that for me :D
(sorry for haphazard mistakes, english is not my native. let me know if something is less understandable!)
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April 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I thought I can leave a comment after each chapter but now I see that they're listed belov each other. I don't know the site, may I did something wrong? or is it it's way in here? anyway, if you don't mind I'll leave my comments by chapter. so it's for 3rd.
it seems to be interesting! I can't wait to see how they become lovers! Kisame is cute to worry for Itachi :)
it seems to be interesting! I can't wait to see how they become lovers! Kisame is cute to worry for Itachi :)
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April 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ch. 4.
hmm it's even more interesing! poor Kakashi is sure confused a lot!
and Pein is just a little cutei ;)
hmm it's even more interesing! poor Kakashi is sure confused a lot!
and Pein is just a little cutei ;)
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April 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ch. 5.
uhh this really will be ugly... I wonder what Kakashi will do.
and I hope later we'll see the continuation of the flashback!
uhh this really will be ugly... I wonder what Kakashi will do.
and I hope later we'll see the continuation of the flashback!
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October 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best fanfics that I have ever read. It incredibly imaginative and detailed. The smut is awesome. I felt as if these characters were part of my life. I even cried during the last few chapters. You are a VERY good writer. I cant wait to see what happens in Part 2. Keep up the good work. P.S. I wouldn't mind being in the middle of the four of those guys.
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January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AMAZING story - fast paced and exciting. INCREDIBLE sensuality and emotion. ***** (5 stars)
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July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really loved your story,thanks
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July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
fun ending,
thanks for the story
thanks for the story