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April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter a lot. =D Your writing keeps me captivated... you write with a sense of purpose thats often hard to find in other AFF stories I read. Please update soon! (I know you've been updating nearly every day, but I still ask you to update soon just to let you know you have avid readers checking every day for another chapter. ;D)
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April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
a really different Kisame, profound and cryptic and caring.
nice dynamics between everyone:0
thank you.
nice dynamics between everyone:0
thank you.
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April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would think that because his emotions are so mixed up
and technically he dosen't truley want to have sex with anyone other than Pein
that he would be very submissive his first time with Iruka.
I think you got it right:)
and technically he dosen't truley want to have sex with anyone other than Pein
that he would be very submissive his first time with Iruka.
I think you got it right:)
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April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like how you build the story. Detail makes it and yours are not tedious,
but move the story with a nice flow.
I can almost see a little paralle in his getting to know Pein and
how he is getting to know Iruka.
but move the story with a nice flow.
I can almost see a little paralle in his getting to know Pein and
how he is getting to know Iruka.
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April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...Pein's gonna be "hot for teacher" lol. I liked this. I like the way Kakashi picks at and teases Pein. You know what they say about teasing your crush. They are attracted to each other, they just don't know it yet. Loved the update, Thanks for your hard work - Beth
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April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like the way the plot for this story is unfolding. I think chapter 28 was a bit short for my liking, but I'm completely hooked to your story. =D keep up the good work, you have a lot of fans waiting for each installment, and I love how you poke fun at Pain; it's hilarious, but what's even better is that you keep them both IC as much as possible.
Can't wait for more lemons between Kakashi and Pain. =O
Can't wait for more lemons between Kakashi and Pain. =O
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April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh dear, we often fall for those who need us most
and show a little kindness and gratefulness;)
and show a little kindness and gratefulness;)
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April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hopefully, Kakashi wouldn’t share the rest of his former lover’s penchants – like treason, for example.
nice:)
I haven't been able to be online for a while and gah, all the new chapters!!!
I am catching up now.
nice:)
I haven't been able to be online for a while and gah, all the new chapters!!!
I am catching up now.
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April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this cahpter was nice and really believable too. because i can so see pein not being able to write properly because of the situation in his village and what not ^_^ after all he really is just a stunted kid who wants peace for the world
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April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol@ pakkun that sure does seem like something he would do. thanks for including pakkun in this fic ^_^
oh i'm still not wanting iru-chan to get hurt in this fic. so don't forget ok don't hurt him too much ok ^_^
oh i'm still not wanting iru-chan to get hurt in this fic. so don't forget ok don't hurt him too much ok ^_^