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February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!pain-kakashi pain-itachi,whetever pain is hot!I love him!
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February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really love this fiction,it's new and interesting,please Ican't wait the next update,I need more
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February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love Nagato, and I love this story *o*
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February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You absolutely make Pein so damned sexy in this fic! Just Hotness on a stick! Thanks for the juicy lemon. I can't wait for Kakashi to come around. I know it's going to be good. Thanks for the wonderful update, and all your hard work. Looking forward to more.
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February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I know what you mean about new info coming to light. But I liked this chapter, and I really don't think, in my humble opininon, that you should change direction so suddenly regarding Pein. I would think that nine tenths of the readers aren't aware of the revelations anyway. I hope that you keep the story in it's original direction and maybe the next story can portray any changes that have taken place in the series. Oh, and I was a little confused when you jumped from present tense to past, but I'm not saying that you should "announce" when the tense changes like so many people do. It just seems kinda cheesy. Thanks for your hard work, and I look forward to the next update...and you shedding light on the mysteries you've just presented. Hee!
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February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Indeed it's interesting how Nagato became Pain we know,I also wonder what's happened!All the same I'm very sorry for Jiraiya and Shizune (Kakashi isn't dead)and...now Kakashi will not injure Iruka,right?SORRY for english!I can't wait the next update
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February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
your style of writing is wonderful,I love love love this story
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February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
only a word:bravissimo!
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February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Kakashi/Pain? ** strange couple, but interesting
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February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL...I wasn't freaked out, I was suprised that you made something like that so hot. I did like the oneshot very much, it was very tastefully done! I'm glad to see that you've updated this fic and once again you've left me wanting more, more, more. I also agree with you about the dynamics of Pein's character. I don't see him as evil like Orochimaru, I just see him as having a skewed sense of morals. Besides, the members of the Akatsuki are fun to read about when someone is able to flesh them out as I'm sure you are going to be able to with as much as I've see of Kisame so far. Keep up the great work, and I have alot of fun communicating with you on these reviews as well...take care!