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haha, I will be honest to say that a part of me is very sad to see the iruka/kakashi part over as never meant to be, I think that part of the reason why they weren't meant to be, is because they never had enough time to develop, and iruka did too little too late. good story! I wonder what your ideas are for the sequel.

I just can't believe this is finished. I am simply in awe at how seamlessly you've put it all together. No loose ends, no contradictions. It was beautiful and emotionally charged. I was also thrilled to see how brilliantly you brought the 4th back as well. I cannot wait to see the beginning of the sequel. You did a beautiful job on this and I really miss you! I can't wait to hear from you. Love you lots! Beth

Please, please, please tell me this will be end with YonKaka...I know that this is peinKaka but can it also be YonKaka! I really love this pairing!

Awww... it ends... ;_;

But there will be a sequel? Well and truely? If so I CANNOT WAIT! -is jumping up and down like a bouncy ball-

I hope Kakashi heals a bit... and I wonder what the future holds in store for them...

Now I cannot positively cannot wait to see the next chapter. I'm so hyper, so on edge, I've even put my own book on hold because I can't concentrate. XD

I hope you have Naruto explain all of this to Tsunade and have her heal Kakashi- and more importantly (yeah, I have mixed-up priorities)- give Kakashi back his Sharingan (because lets face it, Great Copy-Nin Kakashi isn't The Copy-Nin without his sharingan. Doesn't stop him from being Kakashi, though) and I'm hoping that the story goes beyond just this rescue and recuperation. What about crushing Madara and making him pay for all he's done? Naruto asking Sasuke? I'm so on edge, my mind whirling with so many ideas...

I think you did a good job in keeping Iruka and Naruto IC for this chapter, which must have been hard considering the circumstances. Can't wait for the rescue part. =D

Anyways, great chapter =) and I can't wait to see the next one.

Ok so, my stomach is less gittery! However, you always have a twist somewhere or drop a ball, so I am not going to rest yet!

I loved that last line...He's my lover...Hah! Peins wrath is delicious! It's turning out wonderfully. Keep up the good work. I wonder if Iruka is able to see beyond his own feelings, if he ever loved Kakashi at all, then he would have to understand Peins feelings even just a little. Thanks for all your hard work. Looking forward to more. Yay you!

Wow. This story keeps getting better and better... =) I don't mean the violence, of course, but the way you dilligently keep the story alive and a certain way... is impressive.

I also want to point out that you do a good ob in keeping other characters seemingly like themselves. Gai, in particular, as well as Tsunade. There are very few fanfics that I have read where she is either not evil, overprotectivemotherlike, so badly drunk she's barely able to speak clearly, etc. =D You've done a nice job so far. Or ones where Gai is all "THE POWER OF YOUTH!!!" 24/7 and it get's rather annoying. I like that you make Gai seem more human-like than he's actually given credit for. ^_^

Keep writing! I keep checking every single day, even when I know you probably haven't updates... XD

how wonderfully evil Madara is, (yes you captured him well:)

thanks.

I'm not surprised Kakshi's broken . . . but the way it's written still hurts my heart (and that's in the good way). I love the conflicted Iruka too . . . I couldn't have believed it if he hadn't wavered and had doubts. All in all another excellent chapter, can't wait for the next one!