rate_review Reviews

wow, Kakashi! nooo! I hope nagato comes and it wasn't him that told, please tell me it wasn't him! or itachi or kisame, please hurry nagato, i never thought someone would tip them off but i guess storys all have Murphy's law. Kashi better make it out alive and happy to the very end with nagato, okay!

mmmm - not put off, just surprised you used a "normal"
kind of torture on Kakashi:) but then again it was revenge
for those guys.

First thought was Madara sent the DVD/Tape too, also extremely
happy you had Naruto involved in the "sting" operation.

interesting, very interesting.
thanks.

If this was a hard chapter for you to write, it's nearly as hard for me to critique.

First off, I want to say that I'm still hooked to your story. ^_^ your latest chapter has in no way affected that (except I'm now REALLY bouncing on the balls of my feet for the next chapter).

I also want to point out that your chapter is exactly what you said it was: not cheap angst, but an all-too real depiction of what being a Shinobi does to people and their sense of humanity, mercy, and perception of right and wrong. It was a very good chapter, even if what happened made me cry for Kakashi, and curse Madara to hell, and all of that.

Don't worry, this is just a part of your story. ^_^ It was necessary, even if slightly... well, a little more than evil. *hugs* Keep writing, I can't wait for the next chapter!

=D

Aaauuuuggghhhh! That was soooo painful to read. But I'm proud of the prospective you put on this chapter. There was nothing erotic about this torture at all. It was as it should have been. Graphic but realistic. Thank you for putting such effort into the update. It has kept the story real and faithful to the original feeling. Love you girl. Looking forward to Kakashi's rescue. There better be one!

Really, I think that Kakashi deserves so much more cause you made me hate him (and made me hate Nagato and all them even more) >_>

I applaud you on what had to be a difficult chapter. It's never fun to write realistic abuse, but you did it well without turning it into a pity party. I look forward to seeing what happens next.

I can't believe you just left me there....it is official in my books chapter 55 is the biggest cliffhanger EVER!

I've said it before... Your stories make me very nervous and my stomach clenches everytime I click to open a new chapter. I never know where you are going which indicates that your plots are unpredictable!

I am glad that Kakashi got caught but what will happen now??????

I just LOVE your story! It's amazing how you can incoporate smut (awesomely written) with such an intricate, fantastic plot. And I admire how you give such long, quick updates! Can't wait to see what happens next! <3

I usually don't root for the bad guys but I want them to win this time! Can't wait till the next chapter