rate_review Reviews

Oh...it's like swallowing lead! It's getting painful to read. I don't want anything bad to happen to Kakashi! I want it all to go back to when he was living in Ame. And everyone was happy. Oh well. I guess time marches on and we have to face the music. Do you know how emotionally charged this story is???? Such an awesome writer you are. Thanks for all your hard work. Sorry I've been gone so long. I'm glad to see that you are doing well also. Love ya girl! - Beth

oh, I love the turn!!!

bless you for keeping it different.
see how wonderful sleep can be!

cheers and thanks:)

Glad you liked the fanart. =D I'll probably make more.

I was waiting for a new chapter all week, kept checking back and then when I saw TWO new chapters had been posted, I was like "Oh YEAH! JACKPOT!"

I had to reread both chapters three times in order for me to figure out where Iruka had figured out Kakashi had betrayed him. I suspect he found the note, and then went to Lady Tsunade, and then kept up a charade of still being his 'lover'. XD Briliant. If that's not what happened, then- even more brilliant, because even I couldn't figure it out.

Such a cliffhanger! When I saw the end of chapter 55, I thought I was going to keel over- hurry up and post the next chapter, because that cliffhanger is slowly choking me. =D

Good job! This story is awesomesauceness X 55.

=D

Chapter 53 was awesome! =D You torture your characters so much... it's a wonder they haven't keeled over from it already. XD But you keep just the right balance of pain and relief in there to keep the story alive and well. ^_^

You can see them here:

http://yukimor.deviantart.com/gallery/

I've finally got two fanart pieces up- hope you like them. =D

don't apologize for life getting in the way. You are kind to come and share your imagination here,
so don't sweat the small stuff:) now go get some rest!

I would think Iruka would have explained his feelings about and for Kakashi better, but he seemed to
let it just drop (and for ice cream too!) they need some communiction:)

and go Pakkun, wise is an understatement.

thanks Ms Croft.

yukimor.deviantart.com You'll find my fanart there. =D

Iruka is a punk ass bitch! He went too far. That was the most loveless performance of dominance I've seen in a long time. I think you have Iruka nailed perfectly. I'm glad you didn't make him clingy, whiney and needy! But I do think he would be childish. Loved the update. The story is coming along so nicely. I really hate to see it come to a close. I hope schools treating you OK. Love ya and miss ya...talk to you soon!

hello Ms Croft:)

thank you.

Your last chapter really intrigued me, the way you presented those views on what it means to be 'a human being'. I'm sure Nagato WOULD have had something to say about it- and more.

It's both horrible and excellent that you make Kakashi go through so much internal torture, while putting on a facade of aloof, yet-lovesick and elite, jounin for the rest of the village. It's amazing.

You're entire story is really amazing altogether. I might- no, I'm pretty sure I will- be making some fanart of Questionable Loyalty to put on Deviantart. I can't resist at least trying. This story has really inspired me.

Keep writing, and even if the reviews are long in coming, I AM reading!

I noticed you changed your pen name right away, I had to do a double take...and make sure this was the right "Questionable Loyalty". Too funny, you could have told me this when we were chatting. Anywho...I loved the update. And I loved the way Kakashi was getting pissed with everything Iruka said. Maybe subconsiously, he's trying to distance himself from Iruka. Thanks again for all your hard work, and to all the other Mayas Flame/lauracroft fans out there, I want you to know how hard this lady works with school and everything else. I'm just so thankful that she finds the time to entertain us as well. Thanks again!