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OH MY GOD!!!! Congratulations! You got 100 reviews! I am anxiously awaiting what you've got coming up! I am loving how you're building up to it. Pure EFFIN genius! It's been nice to have a little reprieve from the angst, but I know it's got to get tough before it can get better. You had me chuckling when Kakashi questioned Pein about Kisame...I would have loved to know what was going through his head...Hahahaha! Thanks for all your hard work, I know how much blood, sweat and tears you put into your fics. Love ya girl! Beth

Good god, you make Kakashi suffer! I have no way of predicting how this is going to end- which I like, because normally I'm able to accurately predict how most ff writer's are going to end their stories.

Keep up the great work! =D

ah a little hint of Konan, and is he using his friend Yahiko's body
like in the manga?

I like the oragami, it's very sweet:)
thank you.

Oh! I wasn't expecting that. For Itachi to die. I feel so bad for Kakashi, Pein knows how difficult this is for him. It's all becoming so twisted and dangerous as well. But I expect nothing short of pure genious from you. As I've mentioned before, you have no qualms about taking your characters to the brink of the chasm and even then have been known to throw one or two off before you set it all to rights. It's probably easy to just wave your wand and make all the hurt go away, but that's not really what always happens is it? Love ya girl, and I miss you. I've been really busy with work lately, but I will contact you soon. Take care sweetie and keep on churning out the gold!

This story is absolutely addicting to read. I love the way you have created an unlikely bond between the two characters of Kakashi and Pein that many don't interest themselves in properly. I just everything works out for Kakashi because if he does develop feelings for Iruka or Iruka finds the truth of his betrayl like with Mizuki all hell will ensue (which I will admit I would enjoy reading nevertheless xD)

I believe you mean pinched the "bridge" of his nose.
if he pinched the "base" he would suffocate!
now with that said...

Kakashi...oh what a tangled web we weave...
this is turning quite complicated!

thanks:)

Oh hell! What a gut wrenching, emotional blender Kakashi has himself in! This is tearing him apart. Itachi's emotional state has really become clearer now that you've given this insight into what Kakashi is going through as he finds himself betraying Konoha, Iruka and Minato's son. If he loses himself to the mission, it will tear his psyche apart. If he gets emotionally wrapped up in his portrayal of his feelings toward Iruka and Naruto, then that could destroy him as well. Looking forward to more of this part of the story, but would'nt mind a trip to the past in Kakashi's memory. Love ya - Beth

you've got to adore this Naruto.
very true to character:)
poor Kakashi - he really will be emotionally shredded when he
realizes just how much he has in Konoha. I look forward to the heart to heart
between Kakashi and Naruto.
thank you:)

Apparently, parent's don't understand that being 18 under their roof doesn't mean you can still be grounded. =_=

I'm sorry I won't be able to give you really in-depth reviews for awhile.

However, I LOVE chapter 35. It was hilarious- and creative. =D

AHHH! Naruto! I love him. And you've got him very observant in this story. "Out of the mouths of babes" so to speak. HMMM. I loved it that he busted them making out. It was too funny. How akward. And Gai asking if Kakashi held feelings for him had me laughing out loud! Thanks for the update, and keep up the great work. I love you for all you do! Talk to you soon I hope, Beth