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March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*nods* I don't much care for the show, especially the english version. The voices grate on my nerves. As for the possibility of the ending of the manga, I don't think it is ending too soon, since they are coming to some pretty intense stuff, though maybe after another year or so. I know what you mean about the soulmates thing. I always thought there was more there than just rivalry and later friendship. They definitely have the potential to be more than that if the creators so wished. I like to imagine so anyways. lol... I also disregard a lot of the happenings when I write about them, as we all do. ah, the joys of fanfiction ^__^
I liked the last chapter a lot. It was fun to see Sasuke's reaction to the revelations of his past life. Hehe, I want for him to relearn how to be a ninja... Keep up the good work. I really love the fic thus far.
Update asap...
>Xander<<
I liked the last chapter a lot. It was fun to see Sasuke's reaction to the revelations of his past life. Hehe, I want for him to relearn how to be a ninja... Keep up the good work. I really love the fic thus far.
Update asap...
>Xander<<
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March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am glad to finally be reading this part. I was very curious as to how you would approach this, and I can't say that you disappoint. I really loved how everything was seeming to meld together for Sasuke, and how stressed that made him. I can only imagine how that would drain on your mental stability. Naruto told him the truth, which was good. Although he came on a little strong at the end, which is just Naruto. He either goes all the way, or doesn't go at all. lol. It's good to see the old Naruto back.
I have mixed feelings about Sasuke's worries that he is a replacement, although they have nothing to do with how this was written((I loved how you portrayed this part and that you added it.)). It's just that when you actually come down to something like this, how are you supposed to feel? I understand Sasuke worrying that he is being a replacement for someone he no longer is, but at the same time isn't he still the Sasuke Naruto knew. Like I said, I have mixed feelings on this. I don't know if I should agree with Sasuke's thinking or if I should think he is looking into this too much. Bleh, I'm looking into this too much. I need to stop dissecting fics. My English classes are rubbing off on me. Oh noes. lol.
Well it looks like things are heading in a positive direction... although I am sure something is gonna explode on them sooner or later. Things can't stay all sun and smiles forever... at least not in fics. xD
Oh your on y!gallery? yay. I am going to have to hunt you down. I finally got my account active and going, so I might start reading this there... but who knows.
I am glad to hear that this ending won't be predictable, but I never expected it too be. This fic has been purely original from the start, and I expected no less from the end. From what you are telling me, I am going to love what you throw out. Makes me excited just thinking about it. Now you are going to have to be a busy little bee and write! Every spare minute you have you should be writing. lol. Kidding. That's a sure fire way to get an author burnt out on their fic, and I really don't want that.
Well great chapter as always. I look forward to more, real soon. xD
<3 Akiru
I have mixed feelings about Sasuke's worries that he is a replacement, although they have nothing to do with how this was written((I loved how you portrayed this part and that you added it.)). It's just that when you actually come down to something like this, how are you supposed to feel? I understand Sasuke worrying that he is being a replacement for someone he no longer is, but at the same time isn't he still the Sasuke Naruto knew. Like I said, I have mixed feelings on this. I don't know if I should agree with Sasuke's thinking or if I should think he is looking into this too much. Bleh, I'm looking into this too much. I need to stop dissecting fics. My English classes are rubbing off on me. Oh noes. lol.
Well it looks like things are heading in a positive direction... although I am sure something is gonna explode on them sooner or later. Things can't stay all sun and smiles forever... at least not in fics. xD
Oh your on y!gallery? yay. I am going to have to hunt you down. I finally got my account active and going, so I might start reading this there... but who knows.
I am glad to hear that this ending won't be predictable, but I never expected it too be. This fic has been purely original from the start, and I expected no less from the end. From what you are telling me, I am going to love what you throw out. Makes me excited just thinking about it. Now you are going to have to be a busy little bee and write! Every spare minute you have you should be writing. lol. Kidding. That's a sure fire way to get an author burnt out on their fic, and I really don't want that.
Well great chapter as always. I look forward to more, real soon. xD
<3 Akiru
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March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You handled that very well. The whole chapter flowed easily and addressed all possibilities including the most important, that "this" Sasuke is not "that" Sasuke. I was thankful to see that you didn't send Naruto into an emotional downward spiral just because Sasuke didn't jump into his arms right away. The character you've designed in Naruto is as mature as anyone who's lived over 1000 years should be. Great job, look forward to more!
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March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm happy Sasuke and Naruto are going to try to get to know each other again. Also happy that Sasuke had a nice chat with himself. Hurry with the next chapter!!
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March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Looks like you've got a major fan base here! I'm happy to be a contributing part to that! I couldn't help but come read this chapter again. I kept thinking about it, and I think your story is starting to affect my dreams. I've never dreamed anime-style before lol. I shall remain a most devoted fan and forever willing beta!
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March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG Day!!! I really truly love this chapter...I love the part when Sasuke met the older one. I'm glad that happened, b/c that boy probably would have gone looney!
I just goes to show you, there are old souls in everyone but it's up to you to make the soul a part of yourself now.
Please post soon!
I just goes to show you, there are old souls in everyone but it's up to you to make the soul a part of yourself now.
Please post soon!
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March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMFG I love your story it is awesome. I love angust story and you did it at full blast. It was soo sad and emotional that I was crying while reading this story. It is great you should continue. =) Great Job
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March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I so love this fic. You are writing such a beautiful story here...I just love how this is flowing...I'm glad that they are not gonna hop right into bed. I love the build up. I want to read how they learn about each other all over again. **sighs**
I LOVE that prank he pulled on Sasuke...!!! That was funny!!!
Post soon!!
I LOVE that prank he pulled on Sasuke...!!! That was funny!!!
Post soon!!
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March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*pouts* I dont have little faith..>.> nyah
Anyway great chapter. I loved the little deja vu sessions-it really did start to bring the story together. Also you use flashbacks very well( and yay for not overusing them like some authors whosenames will go unmentioned. >.>)
At any rate, update soon ^^
Anyway great chapter. I loved the little deja vu sessions-it really did start to bring the story together. Also you use flashbacks very well( and yay for not overusing them like some authors whosenames will go unmentioned. >.>)
At any rate, update soon ^^
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March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
xD I wasnt disappointed! I loved that flashback about how they got together and that prank of naruto, I can imagine how mad sasuke was :D
but anyway I kind of like that you made them learn eachother again and sasuke having deja vu´s ^^ I hope he will remember somday his previous life -hopefully soon- and naruto can finally be happy again, well he sure is happy that he got sasuke back but I think it will be different when sasuke got his memorys back.
Sooo...waiting for your update^^
btw: how many chapters are you planning to write for this story?
but anyway I kind of like that you made them learn eachother again and sasuke having deja vu´s ^^ I hope he will remember somday his previous life -hopefully soon- and naruto can finally be happy again, well he sure is happy that he got sasuke back but I think it will be different when sasuke got his memorys back.
Sooo...waiting for your update^^
btw: how many chapters are you planning to write for this story?