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March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
haha.. Naruto is such an emotional coward. All he had to do was wait a few more hours and Sasuke would have come to him. ^^
Lord knows what Tsunade has up her sleeves. Although if she tells all to Sasuke he's gonna rebel.
Keep up the great work!
Lord knows what Tsunade has up her sleeves. Although if she tells all to Sasuke he's gonna rebel.
Keep up the great work!
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March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
TWO CHAPTERS!? I'm gone for three days and your posting like crazy! <3 You brought back Itachi!! <3 Anyways.... >.> Depressing chapter can't wait until the next one hopefully Naruto won't push Sasuke away again. Although i'm super excited to see if Naruto will meet Itachi when Sasuke and Itachi hang out. Oh so excited! ~
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March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What is Tsunade and Jiraya planning? Hurry with the next chapter!!
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March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am soooo happy that they revealed themselves to him...now hopefully he won't feel too alone..
And i knew what the old hag was up too....:o)))
I wonder how much she's gonna tell him???
Please...Please post soon!!!
And i knew what the old hag was up too....:o)))
I wonder how much she's gonna tell him???
Please...Please post soon!!!
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March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You're absolutely correct!!! I mistook Kyuubi thinking for Naruto thinking...what was I thinking? I really liked this chapter, and I'm excited to see what Tsu and Jir have in store for the stoic little raven...looking forward to the next update, and excellent job with this fic!
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March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL, no sooner than I update, and I see you have two. Must have both of had the same priorities. lol.
Anyways, I was so happy to see Itachi again. I have a feeling that he will be amusing, especially is Sasuke does end up bring Naruto along. Wonder how Naruto will act in his presence.
Poor Naruto, what happened to that bouncing ball of energy and happiness that we all love? Hopefully Jiraiya and Tsunade's plan will help brighten him up. In fact if my hunch is right, then I can't wait for you to update again... also did I tell you how freakin' amazing you are for being a fast updater! I could glomp you... but I won't... xD
Well loved this chapter... really can't wait till the next.
<3 Akiru -
Anyways, I was so happy to see Itachi again. I have a feeling that he will be amusing, especially is Sasuke does end up bring Naruto along. Wonder how Naruto will act in his presence.
Poor Naruto, what happened to that bouncing ball of energy and happiness that we all love? Hopefully Jiraiya and Tsunade's plan will help brighten him up. In fact if my hunch is right, then I can't wait for you to update again... also did I tell you how freakin' amazing you are for being a fast updater! I could glomp you... but I won't... xD
Well loved this chapter... really can't wait till the next.
<3 Akiru -
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March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story so far. I like how you are winding the plot together, and I think you were right to delay the first kiss and any more "intimate" interactions would probably do well to be delayed too, just to keep all of us in suspense and whatnot. ^_^
I agree about Itachi although i have to say, after reading the manga for Naruto and finding out all about why he killed his clan, I would say he was a pretty good brother, sacrificing himself, his reputation, and his relationship with his younger brother. i mean he was supposed to kill Sasuke too and he couldn't because Sasuke was innocent. I like how you are portraying him right now.
PLease update soon and keep up the good work...
Ja!
I agree about Itachi although i have to say, after reading the manga for Naruto and finding out all about why he killed his clan, I would say he was a pretty good brother, sacrificing himself, his reputation, and his relationship with his younger brother. i mean he was supposed to kill Sasuke too and he couldn't because Sasuke was innocent. I like how you are portraying him right now.
PLease update soon and keep up the good work...
Ja!
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March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was a wonderful surprise!(I'm smiling still) The first paragraph set the tone for me:) The I can't get him out of my mind thinking of Sasukes and Naruto lonely tears will just make their reunion all the more special. And let me just say Sasukes release after the kiss was wOw!!!! ^_^
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March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your killing me!!!!!!!!!!
I know I didnt review that last time.. but I have mid terms and I lost track of time, and I needed one of those evil brown scantron thingies from the student union and and and.....your mean.
That was an evil cliffy. And tomorrow is the nazi germany midterm, and her I am broken pencil (cutesy of evil cliffhanger) and left with nothing to do but go back to studying.
PLEASE HURRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(I want more angstyness- pout)
I know I didnt review that last time.. but I have mid terms and I lost track of time, and I needed one of those evil brown scantron thingies from the student union and and and.....your mean.
That was an evil cliffy. And tomorrow is the nazi germany midterm, and her I am broken pencil (cutesy of evil cliffhanger) and left with nothing to do but go back to studying.
PLEASE HURRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(I want more angstyness- pout)
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March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You're too hard on yourself. The classroom scene was just fine, it even gave Kiba a chance to show how tactless he can be. LOL. I'm sure Naruto is going crazy, but it seemed like you implied that Naruto has 2 people that he's going to look to for help...would that be Tsunade and Jiraiya? I was under the impression that Naruto wasn't aware that they knew he was immortal. But now that I think about it, I guessed wrong. This is really good, and I can't wait for the next update! See you soon.