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for What Dreams May Come.

by Daydreamer79

person roro237
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful!!! I just love how you've mixed their old and new lifes togther from Gai to Tsunade and Jiraiya. It's great to see who will turn up and as what:) Like Hinata being the art student. I think you were right about that first kiss. The way you handled it was perfect:) Not to pushie it has to build:) Loved it ^_^
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure why i had found it so funny XD. I'm just a tard. Why must you leave us with such cliffy. I already know the answer. BTW i absolutly adore your Itachi ^^ <333333 I can not wait to see more of him and of course more of Sasunaru. But seriously more Itachi *squeals*. please?
person satterb
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think that was the best update yet! Not too pushy and not too angsty. Naruto was bad enough at the beginning. Please keep up the astounding work. And I was thrilled to see that you decided to let Tsunade and Jiraiya in on the little secret. The sparring match was nicely done as well and a good thing that Guy didn't interrupt. That would have ruined the mood. Perfect! Looking forward to the next update!
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for not reviewing the last chapter. I must have missed it somewhere. But then again the last few days were hell...

Love how we have some interaction!!!!!!!! I am so excited, and but now its at that awkward phase of, "Why the hell am I jealous? There is no reason to be, I mean, I'm not even interested in him, am I?" Man do I know that feeling...
person shadowphoenix143
schedule February 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is so amazing! I just found it, and once I started reading, I couldn't stop! I love it when I find a story like that. :) I am hooked now! I will definitely be looking forward to your updates! Excellent writing by the way, and the plot is very intriguing!
person roro237
schedule February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm in love! This is such a wonderful story!! I like no love the idea of Naruto reuniting with Sasuke and the gang in the future. All the sorrows Naruto was going though without Sasuke had a lump in my throat. It hurt my heart. But that made it all the more sweeter when they met in class:) I love your story and I'm so happy to read you like to finish your stories. I'll be here to the end ^_^
schedule February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hehe cooking oil? <33333 I'm not sure why I loved it so much but I did. I squealed...like normal and there wasn't even overly sad parts making me want to some how give Naruto a fox or sasuke plushie to make him better which I can't do, but i wanted to. And it probably wouldn't even help! All righty.... anyways wonderful chapter it made my heart flutter with joy. Of course since I can't just read properly the first time around i noticed Itachi is in this fic. *squeals for days and passes out*. I absolutely adore your Itachi in the one scene that he is there. I can not wait to see more of him, along with Naruto and Sasuke developing a relationship since it's probably going to be awkward on Sasuke's part since he keeps dreaming of having sex with Naruto and doesn't remember him. If that doesn't make you a little awkward when being around someone you don't really know i don't know what does. Can't wait for the next chapter
Lots of Love
GS
person LadyWolf
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sasu/Naru lemon HOT!!! Please...please let the snake bastard rot in hell!!!! How do you find him...**throwing up a little in my mouth***sexy????

Well...I DID think he was kinda cute when he wore the sound village's jounin uniform...

Post soon!!
person Nanin
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM

Ahh, I see you're a lady after my own heart. :3
One-shots do become a drag when the number of them start increasing, and then there is no such thing as romance in them, more like lust.
'Tis a rare sight for me to not be reading a multi-chapter story.
(Very rare).

I loved the chapter!
With the continuation of every chapter, they grow a bit more closer to each other.
It won't be long from now... (I hope!)
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmm... dojo eye porn. ^^

hehehehe... Naruto knows just how to woo his teme back... sparring! lol

Keep up the good work!