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for What Dreams May Come.

by Daydreamer79

person SangoStar
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, sparring. Sounds so sexy. Can't wait for chapter 7
schedule February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haha poor Sasuke. I could imagine it being awkward having dirty dreams about one of your teachers. Wonder what he will think finding out the truth... but first I know know if the two of them are going to be able to get through this spar without getting touchy feely. lol.

Lovely chapter... Update soon.

-Akiru-
person Ikippiki
schedule February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was soooo hot! Does the fact that they had the same dream at the same time mean something?
I wish You could get to the good parts where they are together at last! Yeah I know I'm too impatient and it would ruin the story, forget I ever said that lol.
Anyway, good job! Keep that up and I'll fall in love with you hehe.
schedule February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The scene between Iruka and Naruto was so heart wrenching!! As always, great writing and I'm so glad I took a break from studying Botany to read more from you. I'm anxious to see what happens with the spar between Naruto and Sasuke... will there be accidental jitsus used because Naruto just forgets that it's not the past? Maybe more sexual tension between the two? :D I can't wait! Thank you for a lovely chapter!
person satterb
schedule February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay! What a wonderful update. This story is getting better and better as it goes along. I think it's brilliant that you are having them share dreams...Poor Sasuke soiling his pants...LOL. Anyway, I can't wait for another chapter...keep up the great work.
person Anon
schedule February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Those two are dreaming of each other and don't even know. I can't wait to see how the spar goes! Hurry with the next chapter!!
schedule February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So I read Ch. 5 a couple of days ago but just now had the time AND energy (together helps) to review. :) I'm totally excited for more! I love how you delved into Sasuke's mind just a bit... giving the readers the idea that Sasuke's soul does remember! :) YEEE!!! So excited for more! Know that I'm always reading, even if I don't review right away. I'll do my best. (Very exhausted college student!)
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! This is such an interesting idea for a story. Your writing is so realistic, my own heart aches at how poor Naruto gets through his existence anymore. I can't wait to see how he will find another someone to fill his empty heart.:)
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Im so excited as to how Naruto will react upon seeing this Uchiha Sasuke. I also can't wait to see how Sasuke acts toward Naruto whether it will be obviously the same or subtly the same. It's getting really juicy now.XD
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whoa!! Double take!! This is gonna be a hoot!! They won't have a dead last in there group anymore. I know he'd be itching to tell them who they all look like or how he knows their personalities so well. They'd be shocked. How is Naruto gonna get through this class?XD Are the rookie nine and Gai's team reliving their lives? This is definitely one intriguing story. I really like it!XDD