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February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
After reading Another Day in Paradise, I had to check out your Naruto fics. I am a big Naruto fan too. I just finished chapter 2 and I am already so excited for Naruto and Sasuke. I'm really enjoying the story so far.
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January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
After reading this, i realize what has been missing from my writing, and that is deliberation: on the character's emotions, senses, and explaining detail. I knew this but i wasn't going deep into it and so i couldn't understand why my writing still felt so weak and depth less.
I love narusasu and vice-versa, and though some people might be sad, it great that naruto and sasuke are together, even though he has a disability ( like that could keep them apart anyways lol). When they died, i found my face wet with tears i didn't even know i was crying. it's like you stopped my heart and restarted it, just as they came back. I've never experienced that before. It was hard, and i don't think i could live with naruto feeling sooo lonely again T_T
I love narusasu and vice-versa, and though some people might be sad, it great that naruto and sasuke are together, even though he has a disability ( like that could keep them apart anyways lol). When they died, i found my face wet with tears i didn't even know i was crying. it's like you stopped my heart and restarted it, just as they came back. I've never experienced that before. It was hard, and i don't think i could live with naruto feeling sooo lonely again T_T
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October 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm in love with this story! There are only a couple stories in here that I fell in love with but I gotta say, this one is one of those! Hehehe... I read this whole fic over the span of a day and a half! lolz... I couldn't stop even if I wanted to! lolz! Keep up the GREAT work!
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August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. I am blown away by this fic's blatant awesomeness. I am eagerly awaiting more.
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June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Perfect ^^
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June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesomely amazing.! Its all I can say... WOW!
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June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was such a wonderful story. I found it today and read it through until the end because I just could not stop. I cried so much but at least they were tears of both sadness AND joy! I'll make sure to go check out your other fics, too. This was one of the most original plots I have come by and it was incredibly refreshing. Thank you for writing it :)
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June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi hi! Im new to the story and Im only in chapter six but I just HAD to stop and say COOKING OIL!!! Now thats genuis! I swear. Wow. I've actually used strawberry topping(for icecream) before. But cooking oil is the best use of makeshift lube that I have ever seen. 10/10 points for that alone!
Okay... Back to the fic. lol ^^
Okay... Back to the fic. lol ^^
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June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*cries* I can't believe it's over!! But I think it ended very well. I'm so glad fate didn't stick her noise in and ruin their lives....AGAIN!
Great fic! Can't wait to read more of your work!
Great fic! Can't wait to read more of your work!
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June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was one of the best story i've read.