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for What Dreams May Come.

by Daydreamer79

schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!! How could I possibly stop reading this story makes me so happy and sad at the same time. I don't even know how you do it. There is always a part where i want to bawl my eyes out then there is a part where a giggle like a school girl. <3 it's so amazing can't wait for next chapter even though it will only be a couple of days. XD
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! It is them reliving their lives again. This is such a romantic thing that they all thought of Naruto as precious to them as well. I love the way u explain it all, of how the universe works and fate, how it played it's part too. Poor Naruto had to endure suffering to get to the end of the rainbow. I like how u said when Sasuke was watching Naruto that their souls were connecting. You have quite a way with words. I love reading it!!
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmm.. I'm surprised Naruto didn't make more of a deal at seeing Kakashi's face.. but then again, just seeing the three of them again must have been overwhelming enough. ^^

Keep up the great work!
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was a surprise with Naruto and Sasuke being alone for a time. I thought that they wouldn't be alone together for a while. I like that u made Sasuke and Itachi's relationship normal, loving and respectable. I also like that Sasuke isn't so one-dimensional but very much human. He has a fragile, vulnerable side and his usual broody side which is often overplayed in some fics. I am glad to see you have the old sensai's as Professors.
person satterb
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is turning out well, it seems to be well thought out and planned. Very cleverly written too. It's fun to see you on the Naruto side for once. I love all your Bleach stories, and this one is no different.
person ahmenet
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am truly enjoying this fic. You've written the characters so well and the premise is wonderful. Thank You!
person nm1716
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it, I love it, I love it!!! I can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN REALLY SOON!!!
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yes........I am one of those ppl that never updates..... and I hate myself for it. But life is hectic....and its not like I dont waste all my sticky notes at work writing my stories....they just dont seem to make it into my laptop.....



BUT YEY!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE *dances in bedroom...shit late for class again...*
person Anon
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Everyone is back! Awesome! Can't wait to see how Naruto will win Sasuke heart again! Hurry with the next chapter!!
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely love Iruka. it's really like Konoha reborn lol. can't wait for more ^_^