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for What Dreams May Come.

by Daydreamer79

schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i'm enjoying this alot. really funny.
person BumbleBee
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh..that was just great!
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
:D I can't wait for more! You have such a lovely style of writing and I'm glad it gives you such pleasure to do so. I'm really liking where this story is going so far. I must admit, you had me close to tears pretty much the whole chapter, but especially when Lee was shouting about Gai-sensei and Naruto praying he wouldn't bust out the spandex! Hahahaha! Very funny and very nostalgic since I haven't seen the show in a while. :)
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am in love.Plain and simple. Need I say more?
person Ikippiki
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You are doing sooooo good! I don't think it is even possible for me to be disappointed by anything you may write, don't worry!
(Love the fact that you update so fast!) More please!
person Onikage
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*tear* UPDATE SOON! I love it!
person HikanDas
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
XD I was too focused on Sasuke to think that you would include others. lol But this way makes a lot better sense, especially with Kyuubi's explaination.
Oly, crap. You so made me dance in my pants with this chapter^^
person LadyWolf
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Once again Dreamer, a wonderfully crafted chapter! I do love how everyone's lives have been changed by our lovable blonde...that in the end he was loved by all and connected to everyone...

Can't wait to read more....
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy for Naruto. ^^

I'm really loved Sasuke's instinctual response to his dobe's smile.
Keep up the great work!
person Nikana
schedule February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What!! I was like O_o oh god! by the end of the chapter. It is like having Einstein patiently explaining to you, that yes!:history is just repeating itself like some gruesome chaos theory that explains the fact that every thousand years or so same people, different place can be in the same time and space,just remember, the energy does not disappears just changes and the same person can live the same life "again" prompted by the natural circle of life!! I am a total freak O_O I know,but the update was just awesome and i loved it from A to T ^^
So keep going please,we´ll follow you^^
ps:Best line ever^^(well not ever, but you got the idea)
"Naruto broke away, raced towards his pink haired teammate and began to talk to her belly. Sasuke approached more slowly as he attempted to cool his ardor.
“I hope you don’t expect it to talk back.” smirked Sasuke."
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