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February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
it's an interesting premise. and i really can't wait to see where it takes you. i like the idea of naruto being forced to continue to live because of the kyuubi, and that even though he's survived so long, he can't stop the pain, the need he feels for sasuke. it gives a depth of emotion that will be necessary to the life of this on naruto's part. and kyuubi, that sly fox, what does it have up it's mighty demonic sleeves?
the flashes are nice. i like seeing how they lived before as ninja, and i like seeing them as lovers, before they have to start the whole process over again. how bittersweet that will be, ne?
there were a few parts in the first chapter where the tenses were in conflict with one another, but other than that, a great and interesting story.
out of curiosity, are you going to be pulling from the movie in this?
the flashes are nice. i like seeing how they lived before as ninja, and i like seeing them as lovers, before they have to start the whole process over again. how bittersweet that will be, ne?
there were a few parts in the first chapter where the tenses were in conflict with one another, but other than that, a great and interesting story.
out of curiosity, are you going to be pulling from the movie in this?
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February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I can´t wait till they are going to meet each other again and what Naruto´s reaction will be! I´m so excited!
Cant wait for the next chapter!
By the way^^ you do a great jop!
Cant wait for the next chapter!
By the way^^ you do a great jop!
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February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
“Uchiha Sasuke.”
(me)"OMFGCGFGKFIHFDFGOD!!!!!!" (falls outta chair...)
I am Loving your story SO Much! I can't wait to see what happens next!! How long it will be till they meet, how they'll meet, & how will Naruto react!! SQUEEE!!!!
(me)"OMFGCGFGKFIHFDFGOD!!!!!!" (falls outta chair...)
I am Loving your story SO Much! I can't wait to see what happens next!! How long it will be till they meet, how they'll meet, & how will Naruto react!! SQUEEE!!!!
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February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sood good, brilliant actually! There are one million and one things running through my head about the possibilities of this fic. I wondered if there will be any information as to the other precious people that Naruto ends up surviving. You glossed over a little of how he "reinvented" himself on a regular basis, but how did the people of "old" Konoha take it when they all realized that Naruto wasn't aging? Gosh, there's just so much you are going to be able to do with this, how do you decide? Anyway, I'm glad to see that you recognized me. I'm a really big Naruto fan too. Looking forward to more!
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February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A chapter so soon, that's awesome. And so we have Sasuke!! That's exciting how Naruto just missed Sasuke. Keep up the good work.
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February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My heart just skipped a beat!!! I really don't like death fics but this really isn't one...
I love how you portray Naruto...He's emotional but not overly and...and, I don't know...I really loved reading these two chapters.
I can't wait to read the next!!
Post soon
I love how you portray Naruto...He's emotional but not overly and...and, I don't know...I really loved reading these two chapters.
I can't wait to read the next!!
Post soon
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February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ok im hooked. cant wait for next chap.
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February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. The title caught my eye because I love that movie, makes me want to watch it, sad as it may be. I wonder if that was intentional on your part? Is there a parallel with your story and that movie? Even if there isn't, I like this premise. I hope you tap more into how lonely in must be for Naruto to have watch the people he cared about the most, his village and the shinobi way of life die and disappear over time. I hope you update soon, I am looking forward to why Kyuubi has made Naruto live this long up until the moment he is asked to teach this class.
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February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! That was so damn sweet! I hope you update soon!
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February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sooo Sad! What a great beginning to an interesting story. I can't wait for "class" to begin. Thanks for posting.