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February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Mmmh seems like a good start to me, but if what I see coming is really going to happen, Naruto will be so much older that Sasuke...
Can't wait to read more!
Can't wait to read more!
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February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great set up for what I assume will be a Sasuke reincarnation chapter. I'm eager to see how Naruto teaches the class, considering that the lived in that time period. The irony will be nice. Your flashbacks compliment how Naruto is feeling and overall it's a great first chapter.
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February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So Sad!!! I can't wait to see what more will come.
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February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I feel so bad for Naruto. Hurry with the next chapter!!!