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March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cool! I love that the sharigan was reborn somewhat with Sasuke and that those two a had such a romantic time so far! Hurry with the next chapter!!
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March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
O_O i love you.
Someone should draw a pic of that beautiful NaruSasu Moment.
I can't wait for the next Chapter!
Someone should draw a pic of that beautiful NaruSasu Moment.
I can't wait for the next Chapter!
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March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a really beautiful chapter *sighs with contentment*
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March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you! It was so beautiful. The way Sas reacted to the music, and before that i was listening to Carmina Burana which makes shivers in my back because it's so beautiful, and if it wasn't enough, today is may birthday and i am so happy that 1. you have uploaded the new part and 2. that this is so amazing.
Thank you, thank you, thank you so much .
Thank you, thank you, thank you so much .
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March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
haha sexy bits! I think you are doing a fantastic job with the sexual tension between Naruto and Sasuke. Poor Naruto being basically celibate for a millennium. He's a stronger man than I am that's for sure. >.< lol.
I was pleased with the way you managed to have Sasuke learn about the past. I think it would have over-dramatized things if you had kept him spiraling into insanity. I mean honestly, I'd probably get a little bored with it. Anyways, it really only matters if you are happy with the way it turned out and since you said you are, then kudos to you. ^__^
I am looking forward to more updates. I keep thinking that it would be awesome if Sasuke's body would begin to remember simple jutsus, or at least the hand signs for them. But I am just fantasizing... *daydreams* lol. I like it no matter what you end up using for plot points. So far it has kept my interest piqued.
I particularly liked the part with Itachi when he began the birds and the bees conversation. That always kills me. And the delayed reaction from Sasuke when Itachi tossed him the condoms was priceless. Keep up the great work.
<3 Xander
I was pleased with the way you managed to have Sasuke learn about the past. I think it would have over-dramatized things if you had kept him spiraling into insanity. I mean honestly, I'd probably get a little bored with it. Anyways, it really only matters if you are happy with the way it turned out and since you said you are, then kudos to you. ^__^
I am looking forward to more updates. I keep thinking that it would be awesome if Sasuke's body would begin to remember simple jutsus, or at least the hand signs for them. But I am just fantasizing... *daydreams* lol. I like it no matter what you end up using for plot points. So far it has kept my interest piqued.
I particularly liked the part with Itachi when he began the birds and the bees conversation. That always kills me. And the delayed reaction from Sasuke when Itachi tossed him the condoms was priceless. Keep up the great work.
<3 Xander
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March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
..I want Itachi to give me the Sex Talk. With hands on explanations and instrustions.
Really like how you pulled Itachi off. He seemed mostly IC for all intents and purposes. Love scenes were a bit sappy but the rest of the chapter totally makes up for that.
Really like how you pulled Itachi off. He seemed mostly IC for all intents and purposes. Love scenes were a bit sappy but the rest of the chapter totally makes up for that.
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March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Mmmh that was hot! You tease.. I can't wait for them to get down to it lol. And Itachi is so intriguing! I hope we'll read more about him!
I'm looking forward to the next chapters!
I'm looking forward to the next chapters!
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March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Girl you are good. *drools a bit....
Anyway hints of Sharingan? Is it going to pop out or something because if I was Sasuke I my eyes went from black to red. I would kind of freak out a bit. But eh thats just me. I am almost afraid of whats going to happen if Kyuubi should say hello or something.
Poor Sasuke would go nuts. Man now all sorts of what ifs are going be going into my poor wittle brain while you are gone. BLEH!
Happy vacation or whatever though and you better make the next one just as good *grins
Girl you are good. *drools a bit....
Anyway hints of Sharingan? Is it going to pop out or something because if I was Sasuke I my eyes went from black to red. I would kind of freak out a bit. But eh thats just me. I am almost afraid of whats going to happen if Kyuubi should say hello or something.
Poor Sasuke would go nuts. Man now all sorts of what ifs are going be going into my poor wittle brain while you are gone. BLEH!
Happy vacation or whatever though and you better make the next one just as good *grins
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March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very hot scene in the woods at the end there...
...although the joy it brought was nothing compared to the glee I felt at Itachi's teasing of Sasuke about giving him the talk. Wonderful. Absolutely brilliant. ^^
Keep up the great work!
...although the joy it brought was nothing compared to the glee I felt at Itachi's teasing of Sasuke about giving him the talk. Wonderful. Absolutely brilliant. ^^
Keep up the great work!
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March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was so sweet. I loved the meeting between Itachi, Sasuke, and Naruto it was just right. The teasing afterward that Sasuke endured was great to see, I always like to see Itachi and Sasuke have a good relationship. I loved the bit with their hearts beating in sync, I hope they have more sweet moments as time passes.