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for The Path to Change

by aquarakaiba

schedule September 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
-screams at the top of her lungs- EeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeVIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIILL!!!

Hurry please!
person Anon
schedule August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aaaw, Naru-chan just couldn't resist Sasuke-chan's sweet lips now, could he? :D Keep up the good work, that story's cute I wanna see what happens!! :)
schedule July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hahaha Sasu passed out from blood lose! haha cant wait 4 more! please update it soon.
schedule July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lol. Poor poor Sasu-chan. From one shock to another... Then Gaara and Neji invited him to play as well. wows roflmao
schedule July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! I LOVED Sasuke's reaction to the club being the other part of the business.:D Then for him to get a sudden nose bleed amd hit the floor after Naruto tells him of his own orientation.:D Icracked up !!! >.<
schedule July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh good I'm relieved that Sasuke is just fine with the club and is thinking little things about Naruto like Naruto is thinking about him.:D Maybe they'll do a little more when in the privacy of the office. *wags brows*
Or am i rushing things a bit ?:)
schedule July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
it's okay i am glad you posted......i just read it again and i see no mistake......great job!!! email me when you have more and if i have any ideas i will send them to you. but right now i am lovin it!!!!!!
schedule July 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG!!! SASU!!!!!!!!! He-he-he fainted! And had a nose bleed. lol whooow
person Halskr
schedule July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am glad you put Kakashi in there somewhere because I just can't picture Iruka ever owning a Strip club. That said, this is pretty interesting. I cant wait to read the next update. Although, I am sorry; I just cant picture Lee generating lots of repeat customers. The hair would scare me away!!
schedule July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah lawd! Sasuke's working in a brothel! Thats what it is isnt it?