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for Misbehave

by tinkerbell0908

schedule November 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4

Ok have to be honest....I skipped anything that said Hinata....sorry .....love all the other characters though and all the descriptions of them. REALLY excited to find out what happens at this anime convention!! YAY :) GRIN
schedule November 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Misbehave Chapter 7

WOW!! That was just REALLY STEAMY!!EROTIC!!HOT!!!SEXY!!! LOVE IT!!!

Ok must go back and read it again!!!


AWSOME!!!!
schedule November 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Misbehave Ch.8
I really enjoy how this story is going and am looking forward to what happens next!!
schedule May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow... Quick info-packed chapter. Im so sad that there wasnt a lemon for Sasu losing his "virginity". *cries anime style*
schedule May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I gotta say I really enjoyed this, the way you built the story. letting us get to know sasuke and how his "normal" life with his girlfriend was before he met Naruto.. most people would have just jumped straight to the first day of the convention, but this way we got a better understanding of why Sasuke chose Naruto over Hinata. and I like your writing style too.. its cool once I got used to the dialogue. (yeah.. its in the middle of the night here, I`m kinda sleepy.. and my mind wasn`t too fond of the quick jumps back and forth xD) anywhoooos. I like it. *nods* especially the little details.. like when sasukes high heels scraped against the floor with the clunk-clunk-scrape. haha! so clumsy sasuke.. mh.. and the sex was hot. and wow.. lookit this long assed rev. anywhoodles, looking forward to the next chappie.

~Elfen.
schedule May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
TEH AWESOMENESS!!! Sasu-chan is emo!!!!! LMFAO. I love it! I so cant wait to see more. Im sorta kinda sad for Hinata, but Naru/Sasu is what I came here for.